Enjoyable to read, much better than most wealth system/urban systems in terms of plot. The pacing is all over the place though. He’s already basically taken over the world, but then we spend multiple chapters on mundane things like going to school and a tiny cosmetics company? Just makes it hard to care about those plot points. Not the biggest fan of MC’s overly controlling nature either. All the drama with his lawyer/assistant feels a bit forced. Maybe it’s to give room for future character development, though, so I’m trying to give it the benefit of the doubt. Also, maybe it’s a personal opinion but a whole chapter covering the other party’s reaction to an event that we know would be shocking to them isn’t interesting *at all.*
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