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I dunno if I’m going crazy but the lack of conjunctions makes the story flow worse for me. Feels like a recent change - maybe unintentional? Regardless, TFTC

Love the story. Chapters are out of order again though.

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Isn’t this supposed to be Kindred?

The author could use a beta reader or a grammarly subscription as there are a decent number of typos, misspellings and improper word usage (‘to’ vs ‘too’). However, that shouldn’t take away from the quality of the story. The mc feels unique and it’s easy to become invested in the character/story development. Looking forward to more chapters.

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Bruh

He quit tho?

The number of plot points driven by miscommunication in this story is insane