I picked this novel up after I read the authors other book All of Creation, which I really didn’t enjoy. The author suggested I try his other novels and I found this one which I have come to like. After 40 chapters, im still reading on. For the most, the updating is rather good, I tend to read chapters after about 4 or so accumulate to get a good chunk, the downside is I sometimes have to flip back a chapter or two to recall events. I feel the only downside is that everything seems way to easy at the moment, rewards seem to be raining down all the time and all of them are pretty good. I believe to offset this is to throw a few lemons in the mix so it is always a surprise and not the expected. Ezmode begins to lose flavour after abit, but in this case I do like the genre of Urban and systems and it is keeping me rather amused to read further and to throw stones and coin to unlock further chapters. Oh another thing I am in two minds about is his desire to always be in control. Mind you it isnt a bad thing at all, only being in control allows one to develop more, however with relationships, there should be a balance. An example was his attitude to continually draw the system lottery just to get another AI, just to put his first AI in her place, I felt this was rather childish and petulant. Still it is early days and perhaps the MC will grow in maturity further. Overall this book is worth taking a look at and to add to the readers library.

Starting was great but then the MC suddenly wants to Improve the technology of the Whole World (which i honestly don't know why)........Is he being a Saint or what?? And then he just goes around doing all the mundane things and wasting time, seriously at this point it feels like the author doesn't know what the story should be, so just let him revolutionize the whole world...This guy couldn't even complete 3 simple missions so far.

Reveal spoiler

A good story as of chapter 39. It seems to lack transitions from chapter to chapter so if you don’t remember the story well then you may have to go back to review previous chapters to understand what is going on. The updating has been mostly consistent with the author only missing a day here and there, usually you will get 1 chapter each day though and if not the following day they have released 2 to 3 chapters. I’ve been enjoying the read so far, I would suggest the author try writing 2 chapters every day even if you’re not posting them, you can schedule them to post in advance and build up a stockpile of chapters so that if you miss a day of writing you don’t have a day where nothing gets released.. this could also help with releasing bonus chapters in the future as it wouldn’t put a strain on you trying to write even more chapters to get the bonus chapters out.

The world seems interesting enough, and there is a solid through-line of depth and worldbuilding consistency.My issue arises in that by chapter 30, there are no obvious problems that can't be solved inherently. To an obsured level of wish-fufillment. The system takes this to something akin to a Slice of Life novel with no real sense of pacing or scale.

I like the novel, and I honestly really like the fast pacing ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Nice———————————————————————————————————-

this has been a pretty intersting read ive ben enjoying it alot

overall very nice serie and i love watching it