As I'm writing this the fic is in its early stages but it's looking really good. Onto the review: Writing Quality:5/5 supreme. In all the fanfics I've read I'd notice a bit of grammatical errors this is pristine. good stuff. Story Development:4/5 Pacing is nice but l can see you getting better at it. The second chapter of the child arc before the academy seemed a bit drawn out but you established how the characters synergise with each other so no complaints. Character Design: 5/5 Loveable MC nara clan isn't loud and annoying love shikaku and shikimaru The main character akira nara for once in a Naruto fanfic will not make you cough blood like your in a wuxia novel. just for that read it also I adore ten shadows. Updating Stability: 4/5 The fic is in its early stages so can't say a lot bout this. World Background: 4/5 only 4/5 cause I've personally suffered so much Naruto fics. To the author you'r doing God's work supremely done. I hope l can see this go a long and prosperous way. Also thanks for replying to comments! In short: author Is goated same with the story definitely have my eyes peeled for this. this is the good stuff

Jeff approves 👍

A solid story for me .... story pace is good .. MC is really beautifully fleshed out ... update stability is decent i guess and author says he is working on it ... a 9/10 story for me

I have been reading fanfics for about 3 years now. some of them are Naruto ones , Avatar ones, a few Dc ones a few Mtl ones majority of them consists of naruto ones tho genshin fics and MHA ones but this is the diamonds in the rough this story has the most natural integration of the mc in the world and the clever use of Kyubbi attack to orphan him and make him feel iffy about Naruto and his 30% retention of memories is an ingenious idea truthfully. I don't really care about Harem since people can have multiple relationship until they commit to someone. So I don't mind him having a more humane side since we all have had various relations. Bro I love how he interacts with his aunt and uncle. And the most fun times for me were when he thew jabs at sakura's forehead without even saying it. WHAHAHAHHAHAHAAA

Ok, this is honestly a pretty decent story overall. It has all the hallmarks of a good story, with pretty good grammar and plot-line. However, it does have some issues. The pacing is pretty abysmal, and despite there being 15+ chapters, it feels like it is still at the starting line. Not necessarily bad, but the extraneous plot-lines are really interesting enough to keep my interest. Most of the character are pretty in-character, as far as I know. The MC is a bit irritating, while it is good that he isn't the 'instant prodigy OP', his general attitude can just be a bit annoying. Especially since with the whole Ten Shadows thing, I was really hoping for a more JJK character mentality. A lot of these issues could be resolved with time, but right now they are a bit too much for me to continue with this story. I wish you the best of luck author!

I'll give you 2 power stones everyday i don't know if this will help you be motivated but please continue this fanfic

Keep up the great work and I hope you could maintain or improve your novel quality in the future. Lastly be safe and stay awesome 👍 👍 👍 👍

so, when you say slow burn, is for the mc or us... ?

A very good start. I look forward to reading this.