It’s easy to read for English readers who don’t really require commas and the like, the words used are advanced so people complaining are probably not native speakers or are pea brains who require such things to understand intended meaning. this is 1000% more palatable than the Chinese Mtl garbage that usually gets posted.

This isnt soo bad like other say,first he is born 900 years before story so what?he would go to sleep and bum meet Harry Potter?better if he make some legends in history to make impact in main story

hes deleted everything to if your looking for the book gl

i stoped at around chap 20. not that its bad but i just felt lost with all the info thrown around. the story is really good and a must read and there is a lot of in depth info on magic that i find interesting and pretty cool.tho i would recomend author to put like a word explination to terms and names that some people might not know, understand or ponounce cus there were a few terms i did not understand and didn't fell like looking up(my problem, not yours).

I like the setting of the story and the update speed is also good (at ch 31)Though there are some obvious written issues and a lot of exposition(like more than the actual dialogues) I hope the story gets completed if nothing else. don't leave the story hanging and improvement is much appreciated.

i dont agree with the negative reviews, it is a good story, what more can i say. so troll dont give negative review, it is worth the read

I love this its very good it dosent feel like a harry potter fic so if u want some harry potter stuff thats related to plot so its not that but thats why it so good its not like everyother HP ff thats why i like it so much and it very high quality most stuff do make sense in the story and the translations good quality in my opinion tho its not my native so i cant say anything for the native speakers but at least for me who dosent speak it nativly find very few mistakes most are just wrongly translated and thos arent that bad like i have read much worse so i dont car my own englhis aint that good neihter is my own launage so like lol but would definetly recomend to read for all who migth like a harry pitter fic thats more on au but still has the core of harry potter better than most harry potter fics that have marvel/mcu most of the are kinda bad cus i feel like hp magic dosent go that well with mcu tho its bit difrent if the fic is a template fic or gacha sytem vut in the end lool AUHTOR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 💀

This is one of the more in-depth world building works I have read, it develops multiply factions instead of ’enemy faction crush’ good work mate keep going plz

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