i dont agree with the negative reviews, it is a good story, what more can i say. so troll dont give negative review, it is worth the read
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LIKEThese aren't troll reviews, but legit bad ones with purpose.Either the author lacks basic knowledge or, in the case of the translator, basic english skills. Example: they claimed in the first chapter that the n-word written with double g, as in the slur to be the latin word for black (which it is if written with only one g). This ain't a small spelling mistake. This is plain stupid. I would double and tripple check before writing something like that. But it's not only spelling. There are many concepts that are NOT from Harry Potter, which aren't explained in any way or shape. In fanfiction, you dont need to explain the source material, but everything out of a source needs a basic explanation or a description. Otherwise, nobody knows what's going on. This fact alone makes writing fanfiction easy because even if it's badly written, everyone knows the source and, therefore, the gist of the plot. Many authors, however, overestimate themselves by adding bad AU plot, OCs, and new magic systems without properly explaining or developing them. These are the really bad fictions, as it's in this case.The premise of the story might have potential, but it's not achieved due to faulty language and poorly intruduced plot points.