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2023-08-15 18:15

I love this its very good it dosent feel like a harry potter fic so if u want some harry potter stuff thats related to plot so its not that but thats why it so good its not like everyother HP ff thats why i like it so much and it very high quality most stuff do make sense in the story and the translations good quality in my opinion tho its not my native so i cant say anything for the native speakers but at least for me who dosent speak it nativly find very few mistakes most are just wrongly translated and thos arent that bad like i have read much worse so i dont car my own englhis aint that good neihter is my own launage so like lol but would definetly recomend to read for all who migth like a harry pitter fic thats more on au but still has the core of harry potter better than most harry potter fics that have marvel/mcu most of the are kinda bad cus i feel like hp magic dosent go that well with mcu tho its bit difrent if the fic is a template fic or gacha sytem vut in the end lool AUHTOR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 💀

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They're not mistakes. Most Old Slavonic words are not translatable into English.

Finnish_manLv4

Oh ok

Charlottess:They're not mistakes. Most Old Slavonic words are not translatable into English.
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