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HolyMantle
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2023-08-04 06:36

"What was the saddest moment of your life?" "Probably when I found out my son had learned to use GPS without me." "How did you find out?" "We were on our way to The Childhood Museum when I made a wrong turn. I thought it would be a good teachable moment. But as I was reaching into my pocket to grab my phone, he was already walking ahead of me in the right direction. He looked back and said: ‘C’mon dad, it’s this way.’" "What did you say?" "I dropped to my knees and cried: ‘My son has learned to use GPS without me.’ I’ve been at war with God ever since."

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TypicalFicEnjoyer6
TypicalFicEnjoyer6Author

.....ಠ⁠ω⁠ಠ ?

Drurlulu
DrurluluLv13

did you made chatgpt do this?

Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

harem?

TypicalFicEnjoyer6:.....ಠ⁠ω⁠ಠ ?
creatorGod
creatorGodLv5

yes

Lord_Hastur:harem?
BeardedBullfrog
BeardedBullfrogLv4

Ok so there’s a harem. How about lemons?

UncleZhao
UncleZhaoLv4

I think tthere aren't cause yk it's a Chinese fanfic 😆

BeardedBullfrog:Ok so there’s a harem. How about lemons?
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BeardedBullfrog
BeardedBullfrogLv4

That’s no excuse. Personally I think every story needs the reader to feel certain emotions to be considered great or at least in my opinion. Otherwise I kinda feel it’s lacking in some way. Laugh, Loathe, Lament, Love

UncleZhao:I think tthere aren't cause yk it's a Chinese fanfic 😆
Vallandres
VallandresLv4

It's big? hope it's not small

creatorGod:yes
Other Reviews
Yamette_Kutasai
Yamette_KutasaiLv4

After reading 770 chapters, I can confidently say this fanfic is one of the best multiversal adventure isekai Chinese translated fanfic I've ever read in Webnovel. The best aspect of this book is how the MC would inadvertently solve his obstacles and problems in Chaldea not through luck, faith, empathize, and friendship like Ritsuka Fujimaru from FGO does, but through sheer effort, wit, and talent by traveling to other multiverse and gain skills/ability from it. The interesting part is the MC has zero knowledge of the plot on every world (Including Chaldea) and by no means OP. He will struggle on each step until he gains enough skill and magic after years of effort. The MC would repeatedly 'isekai' himself and take advantage of the time difference on each world (No time stop) to learn magic or skills from that world and become stronger step by step. The MC would also face challenges on each world and gain companionship along the way. The translation is also pretty good, beside some minor defects like repetitively translated 'Servant' as 'Servent'. There are also some similar defects on other words, but nothing major. Just a tad annoying. The grammar is good enough for immersion and enjoyable read. Surprisingly for a Chinese novel, the Chinese references are exceedingly rare beside some Chinese quotes. Even the protagonist is closer to a Japanese beta MC rather than the usual Chinese MC. You would often forget this is a Chinese novel at some point while reading. On a last note, rather than an FGO fanfic, treat this fanfic more on the multiversal side, because most of the screen time would actually be on the isekai side, despite Chaldea is the main story of the book.

LoreiVonAtaraxia
LoreiVonAtaraxiaLv5
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