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Yamette_Kutasai
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2023-11-15 19:27

After reading 770 chapters, I can confidently say this fanfic is one of the best multiversal adventure isekai Chinese translated fanfic I've ever read in Webnovel. The best aspect of this book is how the MC would inadvertently solve his obstacles and problems in Chaldea not through luck, faith, empathize, and friendship like Ritsuka Fujimaru from FGO does, but through sheer effort, wit, and talent by traveling to other multiverse and gain skills/ability from it. The interesting part is the MC has zero knowledge of the plot on every world (Including Chaldea) and by no means OP. He will struggle on each step until he gains enough skill and magic after years of effort. The MC would repeatedly 'isekai' himself and take advantage of the time difference on each world (No time stop) to learn magic or skills from that world and become stronger step by step. The MC would also face challenges on each world and gain companionship along the way. The translation is also pretty good, beside some minor defects like repetitively translated 'Servant' as 'Servent'. There are also some similar defects on other words, but nothing major. Just a tad annoying. The grammar is good enough for immersion and enjoyable read. Surprisingly for a Chinese novel, the Chinese references are exceedingly rare beside some Chinese quotes. Even the protagonist is closer to a Japanese beta MC rather than the usual Chinese MC. You would often forget this is a Chinese novel at some point while reading. On a last note, rather than an FGO fanfic, treat this fanfic more on the multiversal side, because most of the screen time would actually be on the isekai side, despite Chaldea is the main story of the book.

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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Does the mc only use summons? Is it always weak?

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

please answer the question

Yamette_Kutasai
Yamette_KutasaiLv4

Summoner is his main class, but he could use other types of magic. He will also fix his physical weakness at some point in the future. As for how strong, at 700+ chapter MC has become strong enough to handle low grade servants head on without his summon. His strongest summon at 700+ chapter is on par with medium upper grade servants like Cuculainne or Atalanta.

Haku_Ouroboros:Does the mc only use summons? Is it always weak?
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Weak... Gracias por responder , así puedo dejar de perder el tiempo

Yamette_Kutasai:Summoner is his main class, but he could use other types of magic. He will also fix his physical weakness at some point in the future. As for how strong, at 700+ chapter MC has become strong enough to handle low grade servants head on without his summon. His strongest summon at 700+ chapter is on par with medium upper grade servants like Cuculainne or Atalanta.
Yamette_Kutasai
Yamette_KutasaiLv4

If you're looking for overpowered character, then this story is not for you yes. This story is more about the struggle of the weak with the fate of humanity survival on his back without enormous plot armor.

Haku_Ouroboros:Weak... Gracias por responder , así puedo dejar de perder el tiempo
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Osea que es aburrida

Yamette_Kutasai:If you're looking for overpowered character, then this story is not for you yes. This story is more about the struggle of the weak with the fate of humanity survival on his back without enormous plot armor.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Conoces otro fic de fate con un MC bueno?

Yamette_Kutasai:If you're looking for overpowered character, then this story is not for you yes. This story is more about the struggle of the weak with the fate of humanity survival on his back without enormous plot armor.
Yamette_Kutasai
Yamette_KutasaiLv4

Or Fate: Hammer time by Tedtherabbit from fanfiction.net is also pretty good.

Haku_Ouroboros:Conoces otro fic de fate con un MC bueno?
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Thor 👎🏻

Yamette_Kutasai:Or Fate: Hammer time by Tedtherabbit from fanfiction.net is also pretty good.
shambe
shambeLv4

mah dude, how many will there be in the harem? and are there some lemons along the way?

Yamette_Kutasai:Summoner is his main class, but he could use other types of magic. He will also fix his physical weakness at some point in the future. As for how strong, at 700+ chapter MC has become strong enough to handle low grade servants head on without his summon. His strongest summon at 700+ chapter is on par with medium upper grade servants like Cuculainne or Atalanta.
Yamette_Kutasai
Yamette_KutasaiLv4

I've only read up to 770 chapters and so far, there is no lemon and harem members yet. There are subtle romances along the way, but never really become the focus of the story nor the MC has become sidetracked by it.

shambe:mah dude, how many will there be in the harem? and are there some lemons along the way?
Rillik
RillikLv4

alright... you have convinced me, i initially was looking for a reviewer who i can ask from when the Sao part starts but... you have written an extremely well review

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