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Crytach
CrytachLv141yr
2023-09-12 14:27

yay... another "trashlation" I don't care how well grammar is translated, it still suffers from Chineseum.

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FransizSef
FransizSefLv4

This is pretty false tho? What chineseum you talking about and calling it trashlation is really harsh its pretty good. Rating a book just bc author is chinese is a dumb move. Honestly this "review" should be removed

Crytach
CrytachLv14

... uhuh, so I need to completely forget about the personality of the characters because they aren't important? how about the expressions? how about the communist mindsets? how about the general arrogance the characters show? because that is exclusive to Chinese stories, it's always "Look how awesome your daddy is?" and honestly i am reaching the end of my rope, bare in mind, Im not ridiculing the translator, however I have to be honest, I can't enjoy a translated chinese fic because they aren't good, you say that my review is bad because it doesn't fit your mindset? why should I rate a high character development? the characters are nothing like the original! how about world building? the entire thing resembles china... that's not the way it should be. you talk about writing quality? the grammar is ok, but the use of expressions are so obviously translated it's not even funny. so you tell me why I should give it a good rating when it doesn't tick any of my boxes?

FransizSef:This is pretty false tho? What chineseum you talking about and calling it trashlation is really harsh its pretty good. Rating a book just bc author is chinese is a dumb move. Honestly this "review" should be removed
Beamingkangaroo
BeamingkangarooLv13

bro got 9000 degree burn right there...

Crytach:... uhuh, so I need to completely forget about the personality of the characters because they aren't important? how about the expressions? how about the communist mindsets? how about the general arrogance the characters show? because that is exclusive to Chinese stories, it's always "Look how awesome your daddy is?" and honestly i am reaching the end of my rope, bare in mind, Im not ridiculing the translator, however I have to be honest, I can't enjoy a translated chinese fic because they aren't good, you say that my review is bad because it doesn't fit your mindset? why should I rate a high character development? the characters are nothing like the original! how about world building? the entire thing resembles china... that's not the way it should be. you talk about writing quality? the grammar is ok, but the use of expressions are so obviously translated it's not even funny. so you tell me why I should give it a good rating when it doesn't tick any of my boxes?
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Chineseasum..

I_LIKE_SWORDS
I_LIKE_SWORDSLv4

Bro sent him to the Shadow Realm

Crytach:... uhuh, so I need to completely forget about the personality of the characters because they aren't important? how about the expressions? how about the communist mindsets? how about the general arrogance the characters show? because that is exclusive to Chinese stories, it's always "Look how awesome your daddy is?" and honestly i am reaching the end of my rope, bare in mind, Im not ridiculing the translator, however I have to be honest, I can't enjoy a translated chinese fic because they aren't good, you say that my review is bad because it doesn't fit your mindset? why should I rate a high character development? the characters are nothing like the original! how about world building? the entire thing resembles china... that's not the way it should be. you talk about writing quality? the grammar is ok, but the use of expressions are so obviously translated it's not even funny. so you tell me why I should give it a good rating when it doesn't tick any of my boxes?
KoryuHotshot
KoryuHotshotLv5

Dood the review you did is unfair because you rated it 1 star for being translated Ch. Novel. From the start you should have known it was one, why the heck did you even whine about it? Even rate it. It's like buying a Pepsi and don't like it because it was from PepsiCo! Delete your review. No one can tell you what you like but you were warned it was Ch. transition and still rated for it? Don't be hater like that, if you just wanted to say your opinion then add a comment to the Author, don't destroy the hard work of others! Don't do the things you don't like the others do to you. P.S. I don't like Ch. Novels a lot too! :D

Crytach:... uhuh, so I need to completely forget about the personality of the characters because they aren't important? how about the expressions? how about the communist mindsets? how about the general arrogance the characters show? because that is exclusive to Chinese stories, it's always "Look how awesome your daddy is?" and honestly i am reaching the end of my rope, bare in mind, Im not ridiculing the translator, however I have to be honest, I can't enjoy a translated chinese fic because they aren't good, you say that my review is bad because it doesn't fit your mindset? why should I rate a high character development? the characters are nothing like the original! how about world building? the entire thing resembles china... that's not the way it should be. you talk about writing quality? the grammar is ok, but the use of expressions are so obviously translated it's not even funny. so you tell me why I should give it a good rating when it doesn't tick any of my boxes?
Yamcha_solos
Yamcha_solosLv4

Bro just said communist mindset have you even read the book you sound like you don’t like it cause the author is Chinese and not that the story is bad

Crytach:... uhuh, so I need to completely forget about the personality of the characters because they aren't important? how about the expressions? how about the communist mindsets? how about the general arrogance the characters show? because that is exclusive to Chinese stories, it's always "Look how awesome your daddy is?" and honestly i am reaching the end of my rope, bare in mind, Im not ridiculing the translator, however I have to be honest, I can't enjoy a translated chinese fic because they aren't good, you say that my review is bad because it doesn't fit your mindset? why should I rate a high character development? the characters are nothing like the original! how about world building? the entire thing resembles china... that's not the way it should be. you talk about writing quality? the grammar is ok, but the use of expressions are so obviously translated it's not even funny. so you tell me why I should give it a good rating when it doesn't tick any of my boxes?
skizrim_3
skizrim_3Lv12

thank you looking for something telling me about the Chinese style writing👍

MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

complaining about being too "Chinese" on Chinese app. stupid. didn't bother to give decent review.

Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6

Well MC doesn't suffer from typical Chinese MC problems. I remember reading it long ago and I don't think it even had any hating Japan thing.

dankoku
dankokuLv4

Not to mention that this novel literally doesn't feel Chinese at all, the guy made up bs to hate on it.

MorningWood_Dao:complaining about being too "Chinese" on Chinese app. stupid. didn't bother to give decent review.
BoredDaemonGod
BoredDaemonGodLv4

so is there any propoganda, racism, faceslapping and young master thingy in this fic? if not then this is decent one

Lord_Fate_Master
Lord_Fate_MasterLv5

faceslapping? There are some. Young master? The MC is the young master. Racism? Well, I just say he is racist against other fantasy races. I read all this fic time ago and I still remember how it is a mix between Grand Shojo summoning and Holistic Fantasy

BoredDaemonGod:so is there any propoganda, racism, faceslapping and young master thingy in this fic? if not then this is decent one
Lord_Fate_Master
Lord_Fate_MasterLv5

try the original on mtl, you'll understand how the original author did alot to increase the word count

dankoku:Not to mention that this novel literally doesn't feel Chinese at all, the guy made up bs to hate on it.
dankoku
dankokuLv4

You think?

Lord_Fate_Master:try the original on mtl, you'll understand how the original author did alot to increase the word count
koijiro21
koijiro21Lv1

this is really racist

Crytach
CrytachLv14

is it really? I love the Chinese culture, I find it to be one of the most interesting and extensive that there are, however I do not prescribe to what is being done with these novels, the lack depth they lack morals, the translations are bad, that is not a racist comment besides the Chineseum statement, however the primary issue I have with it has no bearing on whether is is "Chineseum" or not, it's just bad. that's all there is to say.

koijiro21:this is really racist
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

Just because you didn’t have anything else racist in your comment doesn’t make it any less racist so yes it’s racist. It was racist the moment you put that word in there.

Crytach:is it really? I love the Chinese culture, I find it to be one of the most interesting and extensive that there are, however I do not prescribe to what is being done with these novels, the lack depth they lack morals, the translations are bad, that is not a racist comment besides the Chineseum statement, however the primary issue I have with it has no bearing on whether is is "Chineseum" or not, it's just bad. that's all there is to say.
Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

And people shouldn’t really take your comment seriously no matter what you say if you say something racist.

Crytach:is it really? I love the Chinese culture, I find it to be one of the most interesting and extensive that there are, however I do not prescribe to what is being done with these novels, the lack depth they lack morals, the translations are bad, that is not a racist comment besides the Chineseum statement, however the primary issue I have with it has no bearing on whether is is "Chineseum" or not, it's just bad. that's all there is to say.
Bishop_Briggs_7707
Bishop_Briggs_7707Lv14

is it really racist if it's true though? or did it just hurt your little feelings 😞

Helia_King:And people shouldn’t really take your comment seriously no matter what you say if you say something racist.
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