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cuttlefish146Lv410mth
2024-04-02 11:05

I have read 150 chapters, and though the story is interesting and well thought out(only minor plotholes) the writing quality is bad, especially when it comes to keeping the gender the same and names for realms(kingdoms? idk). I have not read a single chapter that has not made the mistake of either saying "...boy.. something" and then in the same paragraf refer to him as her or where kingdoms are called realms, or realms called kingdoms.

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ZetronysAuthor

Thank you for reading so many chapters, I apologize for the mistakes, could you tell me if they were the main reason you stopped reading?

cuttlefish146Lv4

I have not stopped reading, I just wanted new readers to be aware of what to expect, and though the problem with the characters being called by the wrong gender does get a bit confusing and irritating at times I still enjoy the story! The only thing I can recommend it to ask someone to proof read the chapters.

ZetronysAuthor

I understand, thanks for the feedback

cuttlefish146:I have not stopped reading, I just wanted new readers to be aware of what to expect, and though the problem with the characters being called by the wrong gender does get a bit confusing and irritating at times I still enjoy the story! The only thing I can recommend it to ask someone to proof read the chapters.
tom_de_leeuw_8866Lv4

teams or classes being called rooms, and schools being called gyms are another few examples

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