Item: the monarch
Rating: 5
Author: pastlife_me

pastlife_meLv101yr

2023-08-05 08:52

This book successfully bridges the gap between entertainment and profundity. It is a gripping narrative filled with multidimensional characters that the reader cannot help but root for. The plot unravels with surprising twists and heartwarming moments that keep the reader engrossed till the very end. The author's command over language enhances the storytelling, creating vivid imagery and stirring emotions. The characters' evolution feels authentic, reflecting the complexities of real-life relationships. Moreover, the book explores meaningful themes with subtlety and depth, making the reader pause and reflect. It's a seamless blend of impactful storytelling and intellectual stimulation, undoubtedly meriting a 5-star rating.

the monarch

Zetronys

4.2

538 Chs

Liked by 6 people

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SweatysausageLv4

Sounds like something u get from Chat gpt. “Write me a 5 star review for a book”

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Breeze_Lv14

Really feels like chatgtp no I’m pretty sure it is. Like 98% sure

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ZetronysAuthor

Hello, this is my first comment on my novel, I'm going to redo the first 3 chapters, they are in a much lower quality, please don't give up before them

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Rin_NurniaLv4

First of all, you can write your author's notes at the end of the chapter or there's a section for it since I expected to get into the story once I opened the chapter. Secondly, there were few of grammars mistakes which I pointed out in the comments section so I hope that could help. I suggest you to proofread again since there were some confusion, imo.

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tom_de_leeuw_8866Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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Rahul_Verma_9515Lv11

Your novel is ok. I think for a 19-20 yr to write his first novel and be better than most others out there is very good. But truthfully I felt the novel still has many flaws in logic and what you wanted to deliver was not presented as such. I have even written some flaws in logic that I saw in your novel and ignored many others as I was lazy to write more comments. But I hope this helps you better yourself.

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DARK_DEKULv4

Nice book with nice chapters please keep it up because the book is 😃

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coco1193Lv1

The book brims with immense potential, captivating the reader with its well-executed time skips that are both coherent and comprehensible. Nonetheless, I recommend keeping an eye out for a few minor grammatical errors that can be easily rectified. Your talent as an author shines through, and I encourage you to persist in your excellent work!

1yr

Gabrielle_Johnson_6482Lv14

I’ve just started this book but so far it has a strong beginning. The pace is good and apart from a few minor grammatical errors the writing quality is also solid. Will await more chapters!

1yr

evil2580Lv11

found this novel loving it.it has villian mc who will do everything for gain power yeah

revolt_027Lv3

took a while but finally got to the storyline an gotta say loving it so far has most of my favourite elements , katanas an a austerem mc, author dont you dare drop this i can't support you with golden tickets currently but you can get my stones.keep it up

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