Hello, this is my first comment on my novel, I'm going to redo the first 3 chapters, they are in a much lower quality, please don't give up before them
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LIKEThis book is great, I like how the MC development is going but my honest opinion is if you’re able to go back and edit the small errors in the grammar and add a little more detail to the world-building for example like the settings where the characters are at the moment, I think that would boost this book to a whole new level besides that you’re doing great and can’t wait for more chapters to come out
Thanks (:
Hi outher why you're saying the Mc alignment is anti hero when there is a Villain tag? Thanks.
Hello, I'm doing a psychological in-depth look at the main character, at the beginning he's a typical normal person with a fear of killing and things like that, but as time passes he becomes an anti-hero and finally he will become a villain , but it all depends on your point of view, a villain is someone who harms others or pursues their goals at any cost? kayden will be the second guy
Okey so he is only pursuing his goal which is ultimate power and it's not blind by mortal things like women,fame,money or things like that?If he has that personality then I hove no worries. At what chapter will he change to become a villain?.
Exactly, Kayden is not going to worry about futile and useless things like women or fame, currently he is in the anti-hero part, I believe it will be at least a hundred more chapters for the second break and he will become a true villain
When? Because I assure you, this novel's attractiveness to a reader is automatically lowered when there's incorrect grammar in its title and Synopsis. Please fix it sooner rather than later if you want more people to give this story a chance.
Thank you, criticism is always welcome, I never notice the spacing of this part, I will change it when I get home from work