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CruelReality
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2023-08-16 05:15

Really well written in terms of diplogue and plot. I highly suggest giving this a try. However, the issue for me is that I dislike the premise that he can only use D&D magic. Also, as someone not very familiar with D&D upon looking into the magic system I utterly despise how it functions. Thus, I will say this is a great story just not to my own taste. 7.2/10, solid and worth trying.

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proganerx_Dave
proganerx_DaveLv4

as someone who knows a little about dnd magic, how would the limited magic uses compare to unlimited magic use from harry potter?

CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Hard for me to make that comparison. But I would say the strongest spells from DnD are stronger than the strongest spells from potter verse. But if you aren’t max level then I think a top tier mage from the potterverse is way way stronger. Heck even at max level dumbledore level mages might win.

proganerx_Dave:as someone who knows a little about dnd magic, how would the limited magic uses compare to unlimited magic use from harry potter?
proganerx_Dave
proganerx_DaveLv4

Yah that was what I was thinking dnd has more powerful spells but only have a few cast while Harry Potter magic is more versatile and ezy to use but it’s harder to cast spells that are powerful. Idk if that’s a good traid off tho

CruelReality:Hard for me to make that comparison. But I would say the strongest spells from DnD are stronger than the strongest spells from potter verse. But if you aren’t max level then I think a top tier mage from the potterverse is way way stronger. Heck even at max level dumbledore level mages might win.
CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

I think it’s an awful trade off tbh. The fact you can spam teleport and killing curse or disintegrate are a one shot means I would much rather be a potter wizard. Also, there are plenty of nonsense artifacts like time turners.

proganerx_Dave:Yah that was what I was thinking dnd has more powerful spells but only have a few cast while Harry Potter magic is more versatile and ezy to use but it’s harder to cast spells that are powerful. Idk if that’s a good traid off tho
proganerx_Dave
proganerx_DaveLv4

true.

CruelReality:I think it’s an awful trade off tbh. The fact you can spam teleport and killing curse or disintegrate are a one shot means I would much rather be a potter wizard. Also, there are plenty of nonsense artifacts like time turners.
FiLL88
FiLL88Lv1

For me, one mention of DxD and you don’t have to consider reading this ff.

Omega_RX
Omega_RXLv4

Not DxD it's DnD as in Dungeons and Dragons

FiLL88:For me, one mention of DxD and you don’t have to consider reading this ff.
FiLL88
FiLL88Lv1

Don’t get too caught up in the little things. It’s all the translator’s fault. But I was too lazy to correct it... and especially since everyone understood what it was about

Omega_RX:Not DxD it's DnD as in Dungeons and Dragons
Bishop_990101
Bishop_990101Lv4

That's fair. Given how unforgiving the Spell Slot system is in D&D it doesn't make sense for it to exist in a magical universe where generally magic could be used endlessly.

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