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eternaliceLv51yr
2023-10-28 03:18

The story is quite funny but the D&D wizard is out of place in HP world especially if they can’t cast spells normally like other people in the story setting. D&D character build may be interesting in D&D but in real world (or any other fantasy world) it’s unlikely that people (or characters) behave as such. Moreover the grammar and updates are something to be improved upon. But all is not bad, the main character is fun and his D&D references and other characters reactions to it are quite entertaining.

Harry Potter Natural

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106 Chs

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Artem_5195
Artem_5195Lv2

any stories can be combined. The main thing is to adapt them to each other correctly. Here the Main Character slowly adapts and understands the world ✌️

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maskhara
maskharaLv13

story is well written and the characters work even if they arent at all loyal to the source in some cases... what bothers me isnt a critique of the content but rather the concept.... hes self aware and has experiance meta gaming but is strangely not absorbing or adapting to the setting.... obviously this allows the gag to keep functioning but ultimately it goes against what he is as a metagaming dnd character to not even try to break the system and absorb power from the hp system

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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Really well written in terms of diplogue and plot. I highly suggest giving this a try. However, the issue for me is that I dislike the premise that he can only use D&D magic. Also, as someone not very familiar with D&D upon looking into the magic system I utterly despise how it functions. Thus, I will say this is a great story just not to my own taste. 7.2/10, solid and worth trying.

1yr
RandomWeb
RandomWebLv4

Amazing story, and has been an extreme fun read for me. It also has a lot of elements of humor which I enjoy. Definitely recommend reading it!

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craze_8093
craze_8093Lv15

hilariously good, right amount of humor and character Insanity

1yr
Draconic_Games
Draconic_GamesLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Blutmond
BlutmondLv3

Good

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Death_Kidd_29
Death_Kidd_29Lv15

I got a headache from reading this I mean it's cool and all but I'm not a dungeon and dragon player so it's confusing as f***but that's on me for not knowing about dungeons and dragons to understand the book or to like it

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DaoistyhmT6N
DaoistyhmT6NLv4

one of the funniest fanfic i have ever read while not sacrificing the story, dialogue or characters. the choices and dialogue aren't forced and are still really funny and interesting. recommend

1yr
ErrorLynx
ErrorLynxLv14

Really good fanfic. Well-written and the humor is right in my alley. Please don't drop.

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