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MythicalFanFicGod
MythicalFanFicGodLv41yr
2023-10-05 00:36

The power system is kinda confusing, but he's OP so not too important. Overall, great idea, well executed and enjoyable - I just hope that we reach Madara and Hashirama times by chapter 17-21, any later would feel like it's being stretched out too long. Review made as of Chapter 12.

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