A shameless review from the author here. i look forward to your reaction for the novel. Do tell anything i need to improve on.

Rarely has a story disappointed me as much as this fanfic, I will explain briefly, the MC has the power to destroy a planet with pure force and can also do it with illusions (he can control anyone he wants), acquires a human form of his own and also makes one for his 9 brothers, Up to that point the plot was just boring since the story was literally a travel log of the MC who is a yandere (negative point in my opinion, it's disgusting), everything was going well until they decide to venture into the human world, at that point everything goes downhill and as the chapters progress everything gets worse at a faster rate. The MC decides to literally curse Harashima when he is a child for something he hasn't done yet, the MC showed his spiteful and childish side, then not wanting to change the future plot he decides that his brothers must be sealed in humans just like in canon, He is the strongest person in his world and although he despises Hiruzen and his actions he decides not to change anything which makes him even more despicable than Hiruzen since he has the power to act but decides do nothing. Why does the MC decide that? because although he has enough power and enough skills so that no one bothers him, he still decides to maintain the canon so as not to derail the future plot... reading the last 20 chapters I felt like the author time and again ruined the plot with his lack of creativity, he only thought of making a mega powerful MC who only knows how to hide... This fanfic is a disappointment and I don't recommend reading it since if you want to read the Naruto canon you can look for the original since it will be the same.

Interesting start but MC become so OP that now it feels like the most vanilla wishfullfillemnt ever. Dont get me wrong, I love OP and wishfullfillment genre and they can be really good if done right but this feels very slice of life without anything that makes me invested with the story. Still 3 star for the great writing and story idea, but -2 star for the plot developemnt.

I wanted to like this novel, the premise sounded fun, the first chapter set a good premise. However over 60 chapters in, and frankly, nothing has been done. It feels like watching anime fillers that serves no purpouse then to add chapters. There has been meetings, that holds no meaning. There have been abilities gained, that is not used. I am ending my reading of this novel 67 chapters. I just can't feel any excitement to even try to read anymore. I do not recomend it.

Good job. There are problems that can be fixed, especially the writing style, but only with time it will get better. You definitely need to remove the CAPS of the system, it's too terrible to read this. A good fan fiction idea. Thanks for the work. We are waiting for the continuation

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first review is the mc 10 tails or his jurnriki

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This is going to be a quick one. I liked the premise and I enjoyed the beginning well enough. Then... he went to school after decided to not change anything in canon (OK, maybe not nothing, but still...), aside from a few clans knowing he exists ( literally, that's it, they don't know who or what he is). No offence, but if I wanted a rehash of canon, I would simply read the manga again. I don't know what his purpose in hiding is, but I will keep it in my library for now just to see how long this academy arc lasts and read a few chapters after and see where the story goes (maybe the story improves). Not sure if I can recommend it to anyone else though, but for now that is it.