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Spearow0
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2023-12-18 05:23

You had 59 chapters to build a relation with humans, your mc could have made his own cult back when the tail beasts were roaming the world, i understand that you are scare of the stuff from Boruto. But having minimal influence now and with children and under the authority of a person he dislikes so much, its a big let down, he chose to disguise himself as a pawn and be under someone, even if he is just pretending, it does not make much sense, i also dont understand why he is not trying to kill ishiki, that is his final goal right? Maybe free kaguya at some point, but killing ishiki is the main goal, to prevent the other otsusukis from coming to earth, i feel like this entire plan to infiltrate konoha is overly complicated and kinda useless, playing genin, playing student, its all so irrelevant compared to what he could have done after leaving the toads home base, just a waste of potential.

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