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2024-09-23 06:41

Good for webnovel standards. Alright grammar and update stability. That’s all that’s going for it though. MC has a paper thin personality, zero social skills, and overall an inconsistent character. Could’ve gone without reincarnating him at all to be honest, you just gave him a past life with no emotion or maturity carrying through. Could’ve just made him smart. The teenagers don’t act like teens at all, additional characters added are just paper cutouts. Prose has elements of awkwardness, it reads somewhat like it’s been ran through google translate and edited. Dialogue is complete dogshit though, really bad. Feels like an ai was build to insert another character into a script. Plot doesn’t change much, story is also moving at a snail pace. Overall 4/10 for webnovel standards

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