Well, I remembered that it's supposed to be my divine duty as an author to write my own review with 5 stars. If I really had to write my own review, I would give myself 3.7 stars. I'm still very much a novice when it comes to writing. I'll likely make repeated mistakes with the personalities of the characters I'll be borrowing for this story, and the situations may be somewhat unbelievable. However, if you're willing to endure that and accompany me as I improve my writing style, welcome.[img=recommend]

There is too much redundant useless stuff. Reading it feels like it watching a soap opera,, with 2 manu dialog that lead to owhere. 99% of these interactions can be cut down & 70% of the scenes can be cut down, if they are not adding to the plot or a setup for future reveal or funny or cool you don’t need to write them. I am reading onle line from every 5-10 paragraph & am keeping up. That is such a waste... This is good story, start cutting down scenes and dialog to make it a great one

Good for webnovel standards. Alright grammar and update stability. That’s all that’s going for it though. MC has a paper thin personality, zero social skills, and overall an inconsistent character. Could’ve gone without reincarnating him at all to be honest, you just gave him a past life with no emotion or maturity carrying through. Could’ve just made him smart. The teenagers don’t act like teens at all, additional characters added are just paper cutouts. Prose has elements of awkwardness, it reads somewhat like it’s been ran through google translate and edited. Dialogue is complete dogshit though, really bad. Feels like an ai was build to insert another character into a script. Plot doesn’t change much, story is also moving at a snail pace. Overall 4/10 for webnovel standards

I’ve finished it on mtl. It’s actually one of the most interesting Chinese take-on American drama, in my opinion. The man does get too OP by the end of it, but it stays at level of Sheldon Cooper x John Wick kinda character by skills standards, even though he’s an excellent doctor. The story is bit too long for my tastes, but whatever. Characters are flashed out nicely, he’s changed like a couple of girlfriends, and ends up with one of my favourite TV female geniuses, raises a cool daughter and all. All in all, definitely worth it to read it at least once

This is actually a well written fanfic. Granted that there are some errors, but the plot is just amazing. There is only one bad thing for me, but other than that everything is great.

Really enjoyed reading this fanfic, it seems to be well written and heading in a direction that looks to make a promising story. Keep up the good work Author!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

I will leave my second review because basically the author asks for it, I was, if I remember correctly, the first person who found this gem and my opinion has not changed, I reread DAD and I can say that this novel despite having less than 1% of chapters than DAD It is infinitely better. This novel is one of my favorite novels and I hope it continues for a long time.

A fic that can be slow for some people but I think that it's a good thing for the development of character and ''backstory'' for the future to ''have material to use'' which is a good thing but I also like it if you makes people react like you did with the news paper which gave good reaction and reveal the mc to the world and boost the tempo with futur ''action and drama''.

The story is great so far, I like the character interaction so much. Thanks for the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I really enjoyed the original MTL, that this was inspired by except for a few glaring issues with the original it was one of my favorite drama fics So I hope the author can continue this and finish it And I do hope that Paige from the original fanfic stays the main female lead since I thought it was pretty solid relationship at least better than all of his other ones except for maybe Heather, and Juno(which I don’t think counts, because they never actually did anything they were just best, friends) And if the author does not want to make Paige the female lead I totally understand, but I do hope you point her in the right direction when she tries to throw her life away because of her parents divorcing