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2023-11-28 00:41

The writing is overly redundant, it explains almost everything. The author is such a fanboy that he thinks the fictional characters would get hurt, so he dumbs down Sheldon's actions to Georgie so that there wouldn't be any misunderstandings. The pacing also suffers from this, since he tries to include every character even if it won't help the plot. The Mean Girls also felt out of place, you could just include the Heathers since it's the 90s. Even Missy and their mom gossip about them in the show. Overall it's still good, I just wish it wasn't written like every Dhar Mann sketch.

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