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Retards like you should be shot in the street like the dogs you are

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Do it again. Yknow what I’ll copy it and post it for you.

Weird pedo dialogue. Chinese prose too.

Good for webnovel standards. Alright grammar and update stability. That’s all that’s going for it though. MC has a paper thin personality, zero social skills, and overall an inconsistent character. Could’ve gone without reincarnating him at all to be honest, you just gave him a past life with no emotion or maturity carrying through. Could’ve just made him smart. The teenagers don’t act like teens at all, additional characters added are just paper cutouts. Prose has elements of awkwardness, it reads somewhat like it’s been ran through google translate and edited. Dialogue is complete dogshit though, really bad. Feels like an ai was build to insert another character into a script. Plot doesn’t change much, story is also moving at a snail pace. Overall 4/10 for webnovel standards

That’s the issue, because authors aren’t skilled enough to write about a world unfamiliar to them. This one in particular pretty much sucks at dialogue

Reads like a Chinese novel. You ask people for money with this level of writing? You are delusional and a fucking idiot. Unlikable and paper thin characters, shit dialogue and worst of all. Dog shit prose. Reads like a shitty translated Chinese novel

If it took you that far to drop it then you must be stupid

Another dogshit Chinese translation. You can see the translator getting more and more regarded as time goes on. Haven’t read single chapter but I read the first paragraph and wanted to stomp a Chinese skull onto a curb. 0/10 find something better to do with your time than read this dogshit

Dogshit braindead Chinese copy and paste. It’s like you took the grammar and prose from a Chinese novel and decided to write with it. Why would anyone care about the small details like an iPhone choice or a steak someone cooked. Also he spawns in and describes himself as handsome and shit and how he already has 2 girls. Compensating for something loser? Self insert much author? Forced plot, harem, character has zero personality. You’re “dialogue” doesn’t go anywhere, you just added it in and it sounds like every one liner from the marvel movies. Feels and sounds like an ao generated piece of shit