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Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv11yr
2023-07-15 23:49

I really liked this fanfiction but why the MC refuses to become the ruler? surely he could do a great job the way things are going so far and will the MC have any love interests? if so i hope it's supergirl or some goddess after all these species don't die of old age and are very powerful

Survival Manual in the Dawn of Time.

Hora_Do_Mori
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73 Chs

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Hora_Do_Mori
Hora_Do_MoriAuthor

thanks

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Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv1

so will there be any love interest for the MC and will he eventually become a ruler?

Hora_Do_Mori:thanks
1yr
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SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

can you have raven as love interest or maybe darkfire since they aren't used that often or at all

Hora_Do_Mori:thanks
1yr
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

harem?? hope not

Hora_Do_Mori:thanks
1yr
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