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2023-08-23 19:16

Although It's a great fanfic there are a few inconsistencies that I found first is the MC interaction wit people like Adam and Eve, The Presence, Lucifer,Vandal Savage, and the Time Traveling heroes that appeared in the Comics, If the Mc is from the Dawn of Time, Then The Whole World would have records of him From Ancient Sankrit all the way to the Bible Since HE IS the GOD OF HUMANITY. There is also the short chapters UPDATE stability. All in all it needs a few tweaks or more research of the DC Universe and its characters as a whole. I just hope its not another of those dropped fanfic that have great potential but the author lost interest. I look forward to seeing the Authors imagined version of the Dc Universe and join the Mc on his adventures. P.S.: The dropped Dc Fanfic im talking about are: 1. Zenith: Last Revenant 2.DC : Reborn & Just Living Life 3. How I,Vandal Savage's brother, became a pirate king too early 4. A Glitch In The System(DC) The Author could gain inspiration from these fanfics and make it even better for more world immersion. I hope he doesn't drop this like the others and atleast give us an ending or closure.!!! HOPE IT HELPS 馃槉馃槉馃槉

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