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2023-07-16 02:03

I really like it longer chapters would be awesome but that does not mean it’s bad so me likey

Survival Manual in the Dawn of Time.

Hora_Do_Mori
4.7
66 Chs

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Hora_Do_Mori
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thanks

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Cocoerloko
CocoerlokoLv2

A new way to write a DC Fanfic, I sincerely like it and I hope Author does not listen to people who criticize him and does not abandon this fanfic. 10/10

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CBH_X_GRIM
CBH_X_GRIMLv4

the chapters are too short to the point that you would have to wait for 30 chapters to equal one chapter of other books.

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Adracoda
AdracodaLv13

like the concept, like how he formed the observers. pls don't do some thing like observer's betraying him in middle of story. hope author continues writing and don't leave in middle,,

1yr
Saiyan_Of_God
Saiyan_Of_GodLv4

Although It's a great fanfic there are a few inconsistencies that I found first is the MC interaction wit people like Adam and Eve, The Presence, Lucifer,Vandal Savage, and the Time Traveling heroes that appeared in the Comics, If the Mc is from the Dawn of Time, Then The Whole World would have records of him From Ancient Sankrit all the way to the Bible Since HE IS the GOD OF HUMANITY. There is also the short chapters UPDATE stability. All in all it needs a few tweaks or more research of the DC Universe and its characters as a whole. I just hope its not another of those dropped fanfic that have great potential but the author lost interest. I look forward to seeing the Authors imagined version of the Dc Universe and join the Mc on his adventures. P.S.: The dropped Dc Fanfic im talking about are: 1. Zenith: Last Revenant 2.DC : Reborn & Just Living Life 3. How I,Vandal Savage's brother, became a pirate king too early 4. A Glitch In The System(DC) The Author could gain inspiration from these fanfics and make it even better for more world immersion. I hope he doesn't drop this like the others and atleast give us an ending or closure.!!! HOPE IT HELPS 😊😊😊

1yr
Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv1

I really liked this fanfiction but why the MC refuses to become the ruler? surely he could do a great job the way things are going so far and will the MC have any love interests? if so i hope it's supergirl or some goddess after all these species don't die of old age and are very powerful

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Kyndig19
Kyndig19Lv15

Going to be honest this is a good idea for a story but the author will most likely drop it because there isn’t anyone who realistically posses a threat to the Mc even thousands of years before the main characters of dc start showing up. If it were a slower burn or build up of his strength it would have a longer story but with his quick growth it’s not going to have any suspense going forward.

1yr
Crimson_Reapr
Crimson_ReaprLv13

Although the chapters are short the story itself is veru interesting it draws you in, it leaves you craving for more. Now to the actual review: WQ: 4*, overall it's good but there are a good number of grammatical errors and using different pronouns in the same sentence SD: 5*, it kind of breezes through the past, but who cares, it does a good job in explaining and setting up the stage for the story. CD: 5*, I like the MC, he's ruthless towards his enemies and kind to his people. US: 3*, 1 Chap/week, so not the best when the chapters are quite short, but quality over quantity I guess. WB: 4*, just like the author does a good job setting up the stage for our MC and his people to shine, he does a good job on showing what's going on around the world but it's not the greatest. Overall Rating: 4.2*

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quaint
quaintLv6

i have issues with the way the plot went, it was really good until he fought the gods. and then the author seemed to have not planned the story out and now he spread manga and is going out on a boat pretending to be Luffy. the story was great in the beginning but it slowly becomes more crack as it goes on.

1yr
wisdomseeker
wisdomseekerLv14

Randomly searched fanfic and stumble upon this masterpiece. Sadly, waiting for new chapter itself was torture 😭

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