No one would want to admit that their creation is bad, so I obviously rate this 5 starts.... Still though, this is a case of "Fine, I'll do it myself". I couldn't find a book with the scenario and the content I wanted, so I decided that if it doesn't exist, I will create it... I do hope you will find this work to be an interesting and enjoyable read
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LIKEEnjoy it now, but with time, you might see flaws in your story. The more you learn, the more flaws you'll notice, and it might bother you. I often think, "WHY DID I CREATE SOMETHING SO CRINGE?" regardless of others' opinions. Just like artists find flaws in their work, don't be too hard on yourself. You can also get an editor's help.
The cover changes depending on who has the most importance on the most recent Arc, so it will change oftentimes. As for your question... I'm going to be honest, although it would take years plotwise, Shiraori is planned to be a part of the harem eventually after she becomes a God and gains a human form in her own universe. If you don't like that, I suggest you don't read this fan fiction, although I guess if you specifically dislike her, you can also enjoy the hundred or so chapters that it would take before Shiraori joins the MC's harem
Thank you for your honest answer. I actually like Shiraori, but I think it's essential, that she is asexual. I hope you have a great day, bye! :D
Yeah Shiraori is great but not made for romance. She has the soul and body of a spider mixed with memories of a human...There is just no realistic scenario where she falls in love with anyone. Her human memories are stopping her from mating with other spiders and her spider soul makes her not even consider humans as an option. I mean when she is drunk she even sees people she knows as nothing more than food. Making her part of the harem just destroys her entire character...
I have heard that Honkai Impact lore is very expansive and difficult for new people to grasp quickly. As someone who has no experience with that IP, how much lore/series knowledge do you think is needed before reading in order to understand your story? If there is knowledge needed beforehand aside from googling characters as they are introduced, do you have a recommendation for a quick lore rundown or what one needs to be aware of that isn’t explained in your story? Thank you for your time.