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AdamFlores
AdamFloresAuthor1yr
2023-07-09 19:44

No one would want to admit that their creation is bad, so I obviously rate this 5 starts.... Still though, this is a case of "Fine, I'll do it myself". I couldn't find a book with the scenario and the content I wanted, so I decided that if it doesn't exist, I will create it... I do hope you will find this work to be an interesting and enjoyable read

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Ghjjh_Ghii
Ghjjh_GhiiLv1

New honkai fanfic? SIGN ME UP!

FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

yuri?

AdamFlores
AdamFloresAuthor

No

FinnsRevenge:yuri?
DaoistjcJwtW
DaoistjcJwtWLv1

Muy buena la historia sigue así me encanta que aga historia de honkai impact una pregunta no as pensado hacer historia del juego de gran chase ???????

Door_kun
Door_kunLv4

Enjoy it now, but with time, you might see flaws in your story. The more you learn, the more flaws you'll notice, and it might bother you. I often think, "WHY DID I CREATE SOMETHING SO CRINGE?" regardless of others' opinions. Just like artists find flaws in their work, don't be too hard on yourself. You can also get an editor's help.

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Rimuru MC?

AdamFlores
AdamFloresAuthor

Rimuru is a girl in this fan fiction, so take that as you will....

Haku_Ouroboros:Rimuru MC?
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

MC Rimuru Fem + Yuri?

AdamFlores:Rimuru is a girl in this fan fiction, so take that as you will....
AdamFlores
AdamFloresAuthor

As I've already said, there will be no Yuri amongst Adam's (MC's) harem

Haku_Ouroboros:MC Rimuru Fem + Yuri?
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Adam no es Rimuru?

Insanguis
InsanguisLv4

Honkai fic with no yuri?! SIGN ME UP!

AdamFlores:No
Twice_James153
Twice_James153Lv4

I see you chose Siraori as the book cover. I sincerely hope, that she isn't part of your harem-plan, but still in this fic. Is she one of the side characters?

AdamFlores
AdamFloresAuthor

The cover changes depending on who has the most importance on the most recent Arc, so it will change oftentimes. As for your question... I'm going to be honest, although it would take years plotwise, Shiraori is planned to be a part of the harem eventually after she becomes a God and gains a human form in her own universe. If you don't like that, I suggest you don't read this fan fiction, although I guess if you specifically dislike her, you can also enjoy the hundred or so chapters that it would take before Shiraori joins the MC's harem

Twice_James153:I see you chose Siraori as the book cover. I sincerely hope, that she isn't part of your harem-plan, but still in this fic. Is she one of the side characters?
Twice_James153
Twice_James153Lv4

Thank you for your honest answer. I actually like Shiraori, but I think it's essential, that she is asexual. I hope you have a great day, bye! :D

AdamFlores:The cover changes depending on who has the most importance on the most recent Arc, so it will change oftentimes. As for your question... I'm going to be honest, although it would take years plotwise, Shiraori is planned to be a part of the harem eventually after she becomes a God and gains a human form in her own universe. If you don't like that, I suggest you don't read this fan fiction, although I guess if you specifically dislike her, you can also enjoy the hundred or so chapters that it would take before Shiraori joins the MC's harem
Sindura
SinduraLv14

Yeah Shiraori is great but not made for romance. She has the soul and body of a spider mixed with memories of a human...There is just no realistic scenario where she falls in love with anyone. Her human memories are stopping her from mating with other spiders and her spider soul makes her not even consider humans as an option. I mean when she is drunk she even sees people she knows as nothing more than food. Making her part of the harem just destroys her entire character...

Twice_James153:Thank you for your honest answer. I actually like Shiraori, but I think it's essential, that she is asexual. I hope you have a great day, bye! :D
Twice_James153
Twice_James153Lv4

Sindura:Yeah Shiraori is great but not made for romance. She has the soul and body of a spider mixed with memories of a human...There is just no realistic scenario where she falls in love with anyone. Her human memories are stopping her from mating with other spiders and her spider soul makes her not even consider humans as an option. I mean when she is drunk she even sees people she knows as nothing more than food. Making her part of the harem just destroys her entire character...
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Pic MC?

Dao_of_VTubing
Dao_of_VTubingLv4

Gotta ask my dear Author, will you save Mobius/Ouroboros' assistant?

Salty_God_Tuna
Salty_God_TunaLv5

Dimentional?so Herrcsher of the Voids metaform?😍😍😍

Robehn
RobehnLv13

I have heard that Honkai Impact lore is very expansive and difficult for new people to grasp quickly. As someone who has no experience with that IP, how much lore/series knowledge do you think is needed before reading in order to understand your story? If there is knowledge needed beforehand aside from googling characters as they are introduced, do you have a recommendation for a quick lore rundown or what one needs to be aware of that isn’t explained in your story? Thank you for your time.

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