Ima be honest this got boring, and I have been on edge about dropping this for a while now. It kept getting more boring and decided to finally stop. (the upload speed doesn't help either) Grammar is good you won't have problems reading, there are some mistakes here and there but overall 5 stars. Development is slow (and to me boring) but it's going and it's not bad, it's not great either though 3 stars. Character design is okay but the mc is bland 3 stars. Updates are...A thing I guess. Slow but you will eventually get a chapter, when? Whenever the author remembers this exists 2 stars. World background. It's a thing but don't get too excited about it 4 stars. TL;DR? Nothing special but it's a good read when out of stuff to read.
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A bit harsh, but understandable. I suppose I didn't particularly make the Rwby arc engaging... or well, interesting enough Also, I have to correct you about the updates. I consistently update 1 time a week... Yes, it is slow, and there may be exceptions like when I have exams. But in most cases, a chapter a week is guaranteed As for the main character being bland... Well, I can't say anything in my defense. To be honest, I don't know how a reincarnated or a transmigratee MC with plot knowledge could interesting beyond being smart and using his knowledge of the plot. I tried to make him be as interesting as I could, but there is a limit to what you can do, and how much depth you can add to him in such a short time
You are right about the upload speed. Guess I was just frustrated reading a boring ah chapter a week, and that probably warped my perspective of time.
Can you tell me what makes Adam blank? Or what you think is actually an interesting MC? I feel like I've done better than most in regards to not making the MC have a hero complex or be an edge Lord. So I am not really sure how he could be more interesting
An interesting mc huh? Hmm well an interesting mc to me is something like Subaru, he's so human you can feel his suffering, his happiness sadness and emotions. Another example would be Fushi from to your eternity, that was a masterpiece of an anime anyway I'm getting sidetracked. What makes Adam blank is his lack of anything to make himself feel like ADAM. he's so uninteresting I can't tell the difference between him and any other mc. Hope that was clear enough, I don't really write reviews often so I'm not competent at it.
