I thought I was being boring while reading, but when I saw many comments I realized that most people think that way. 1st The author, to increase the chapter, gets lost a lot in useless things, using his Observation skill as an excuse, he even mentions sweat. 2nd The author loses himself in making characters alive, no matter what world you are in, even the weakest and slowest ones, will have a group, I know that the previous owner of the body avoided this so he isolated himself, but the fact that basically everyone including the teachers, who so far in chapter 30 has not been shown any reason for this to be the case, why would a teacher, an old person with life experience, waste his time trying to belittle a student, what a weak characterization. 3rd Seriously, author, 30 chapters to tell just 3 effective days of history, and in those 3 days nothing happened, which deserves the focus on the story... 4th In 30 chapters he does not mention any fact that gives him a reason to keep a low profile, on the contrary, from what was mentioned when the characters from the main cast talked, if he shows progress he would get a better and more reserved place to train, As quoted by the Protagonist of the original story, within 30 days you will already have the availability to train in better and separate rooms.
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I won't disagree with much about your review, but you clearly don't know how 'weak-charactered' the real people are, especially the teachers you are talking about. You may not have come across a teacher who belittled a student, but I certainly did, and I am certain many other people did this and can relate to it as well. Aside from that, in a world where strength reigns supreme, I don't think weak ones have a seat, considering even in our real world, people who are weak and do not hold any value are constantly ignored. The reason for him to lay low part is mostly correct, I agree that I did a poor job of introducing the reasons. However, I am focusing on those reasons more now, and recent readers will come to understand why. For your first part, I don't care about increasing chapters. I just write whatever I want. I like mentioning details, so I write details. Those who don't like that can read other books as no one is obliged to read this book anyway. In any case, this is my counterargument about your review, have a nice day.
The real criticism isn't even much about the characters, after all they are from a game that was inspired by a novel. The fact that the description is very overwhelming makes it almost impossible to read, I'm currently in the part where he leaves school for the first dungeon, if I'm not mistaken I'm going to the 4th chapter for him to actually enter the dungeon, the description of the black market, totally overwhelming , the constant focus on wanting to demonstrate that the MC is an observer, goes far beyond making the story complicated to read. Until now I wonder if it deserved almost an entire chapter just to show the MC walking around in the black market.
Darkness_Enjoyer:I won't disagree with much about your review, but you clearly don't know how 'weak-charactered' the real people are, especially the teachers you are talking about. You may not have come across a teacher who belittled a student, but I certainly did, and I am certain many other people did this and can relate to it as well. Aside from that, in a world where strength reigns supreme, I don't think weak ones have a seat, considering even in our real world, people who are weak and do not hold any value are constantly ignored. The reason for him to lay low part is mostly correct, I agree that I did a poor job of introducing the reasons. However, I am focusing on those reasons more now, and recent readers will come to understand why. For your first part, I don't care about increasing chapters. I just write whatever I want. I like mentioning details, so I write details. Those who don't like that can read other books as no one is obliged to read this book anyway. In any case, this is my counterargument about your review, have a nice day.
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Bruno_oliveira:The real criticism isn't even much about the characters, after all they are from a game that was inspired by a novel. The fact that the description is very overwhelming makes it almost impossible to read, I'm currently in the part where he leaves school for the first dungeon, if I'm not mistaken I'm going to the 4th chapter for him to actually enter the dungeon, the description of the black market, totally overwhelming , the constant focus on wanting to demonstrate that the MC is an observer, goes far beyond making the story complicated to read. Until now I wonder if it deserved almost an entire chapter just to show the MC walking around in the black market.
I'm on the start of vol 4, and I still feel like I don't know why he wants to lay low. It doesn't really relate to the mental barriers of his and I can't think of any other reason. Have I missed it?
Darkness_Enjoyer:I won't disagree with much about your review, but you clearly don't know how 'weak-charactered' the real people are, especially the teachers you are talking about. You may not have come across a teacher who belittled a student, but I certainly did, and I am certain many other people did this and can relate to it as well. Aside from that, in a world where strength reigns supreme, I don't think weak ones have a seat, considering even in our real world, people who are weak and do not hold any value are constantly ignored. The reason for him to lay low part is mostly correct, I agree that I did a poor job of introducing the reasons. However, I am focusing on those reasons more now, and recent readers will come to understand why. For your first part, I don't care about increasing chapters. I just write whatever I want. I like mentioning details, so I write details. Those who don't like that can read other books as no one is obliged to read this book anyway. In any case, this is my counterargument about your review, have a nice day.
