its like I am having a stroke as I read it. great job for the translator, now where is the grave of the editor? its like after translating it without looking back to check if everything make sense and just call it quits. its like editor died before the editor could edit something.

Nobody suspects the mc, an uchiha with brown hair. Side characters with 2 dimensional personalities fawning over overly pretentious mc. Mc in a group with two girls (usually, it's two boys one girl), one of em being kurenai (lots of chinese naruto readers find her hot). Chinese authors just can't stop injecting their thirst into their novels. Sometimes illegible translation. That's why the score is what it is.

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I'm not a fan where MC choose the weak chicken females in his harem and have to share his cheat power to carry them. The moment he start giving out zanpakto is the moment i drop this trash.

Feels far more like an Aizen in the Naruto world than the other story on the poster's profile imo. Has the looks, the skillset, and the insidious personality and behavior. Plotwise I still can't say much, but I hope it will be good. And the translation is good. Only fault I can give it is some xianxia master logic. Blah blah I'm an Uchiha and we are great and deserve to be Kages. The most important thing in the world is strength. And I'm more than half sure we're just waiting for the face slaps to Hiruzen and Danzo to begin. It has been like... 10 percent of the story? So be aware that it's a thing to expect here.

for me these 12 chapter i can say one thing :complete and perefect every aspect related either to bleach or naruto world is well-introduced no mistakes even the mc neither naive and overflowing of justice nor demon and ruthless ,,he does what makes him free from konoha darkness and the manipulataive F4i am waitting for more of this amazing novel🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

just what kind of English are the author using?? it's feels like I'm reading a math textbook, not only it's hard to understand it's full of grammar and errors. this ff giving me so much headache. I read about chapter 20 but I can't take it anymore so dropped 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

evil lover for this fanfic i can not resist the appealling sense this gem holds 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥you deserve this 5/5 rating🙋‍♂️🙋‍♂️🙋‍♂️

needs to be rewriten