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shin_rae_miu
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2023-07-18 14:39

its like I am having a stroke as I read it. great job for the translator, now where is the grave of the editor? its like after translating it without looking back to check if everything make sense and just call it quits. its like editor died before the editor could edit something.

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Zapheniah_Hayes
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Bro, I have to agree with you on this one. This is horrible.

shin_rae_miu
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lets just hope that someday there would be a editor that would re-write this fic.

Zapheniah_Hayes:Bro, I have to agree with you on this one. This is horrible.
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