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Kat_MabisLv27mth
2024-08-18 22:11

I like the story line a lot. The main characters, Kate and Lina, are described and portrayed very well through the chapters. However, there are a few awkward phrases that don't make sense, such as "If something interesting does happen that not always a good thing as that means something should not be happening is. Like an accident or someone getting hurt in some way, shape, or form." The synopsis gave too much of the story away for me, to be honest. After I read the synopsis, I already knew what was going to happen in the first few chapters, so it wasn't as intriguing as it was meant to be. Also, the grammar could use a bit of work, but that is something that can be easily fixed. Overall, the story is good. With a bit of improvement, this story can be turned into a masterpiece. Keep it up, authorđź‘Ť

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Kamon772
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Thanks Kate and Lina are probably two of the most developed characters I have at the moment So shorten the summary to just state that they were summoned to another world but not to be heroes, OP wanderers, avengers, revengers, or anything like that

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