As a reader, you'd need to read more chapters to be part of the storyline, rather than just barging through. So it's quite good, all it takes is a cup of coffee to enjoy this novel. Great work.

just started it and I'm already loving it

Honestly, the first 5 chapters wasn't as nice as I expected. I mean looking at the name, it piqued my interest, but reading was different. The writer has to work on his narratives and descriptions. It has a nice world background and plot. I would honestly love to see how far the book would go. I suggest modifying the first 5 chapters

I like the story line a lot. The main characters, Kate and Lina, are described and portrayed very well through the chapters. However, there are a few awkward phrases that don't make sense, such as "If something interesting does happen that not always a good thing as that means something should not be happening is. Like an accident or someone getting hurt in some way, shape, or form." The synopsis gave too much of the story away for me, to be honest. After I read the synopsis, I already knew what was going to happen in the first few chapters, so it wasn't as intriguing as it was meant to be. Also, the grammar could use a bit of work, but that is something that can be easily fixed. Overall, the story is good. With a bit of improvement, this story can be turned into a masterpiece. Keep it up, author👍

Nice piece of writing, I like how you used different dynamics. And the plot twist of the sisters not being chosen ones but weapons was quite interesting.

Well let me say that I lost the ability to keep track of this story and the characters. Tbh I want to see more Kate and Lina/Gau and Let and for them to remember who they are, I’m sorry if that has already happened but I’ve lost track and probably need this story explained a bit more.

It’s an alright novel, good idea and execution. The world is set out great. A few problems though, the male lead is honestly a little too controlling. The twins are nice. I’m gonna be honest, while I enjoyed the book, it’s not worth paying money, the sentence structure, grammar, and chapter setup is bad, one scene repeated twice, went to a different scene, then repeated the scene and finally moved on. Constant misspellings and the main character seemingly changes, that or we get a new character out of the blue. So I’d give most of it 5s besides writing quality, story development, and obviously update stability. I’d suggest if you’re looking for a random novel to just check out for 40 chapters read it, but if you’re looking for a novel worth investing your time and or money then find something else. Great story but I also have to be fair here