Kamon772

Intriguing A set up that the original self is not fully gone nor replace. As the feeling and memories remains independent of Jin’s. Which could be both helpful abd harmful going forward

Chapter 6-10 review Interesting though the most interesting part was the introduce of certain character that seem to hint at there being more at play then the main character is aware of themselves. That could both help and harm them if they blindly trust fully in a system or storyline they know.

Zuri Refusing to reading her letter Her continuing to send them regardless of knowing they will not be read Encrid having six star skill but letting it go to waste by disgracing himself This all seems like a plan for someone that was attempt to avoid and/or escape something that require getting fully disgraced. Could be interesting to see how things develop given the possible routes that can be taken from here

Nice set up chapter for what to seemingly coming up Along with setting up of possibly a character that might becoming important later or early sign that while this is world based off story. Its still a world...a reality of it own thus countless things exist beyond the main story or just events of it. That knowing what happens does not mean knowing al the finer details of other 4 traditional of the 5 Ws plus How

Fascinating Setting the process of how things might play out before realizing things will happen differently once he is involved in the main story

Interesting chapter that set up how quest are different and how to increase story relevance. Set up a method to do so with needing to always be involved with a main character. His actions might even make new main characters that replace the original ones possibly

I could if you desire give some feedback on whatever ideas you might have. The story idea is rather interesting and different compared to others I have seen before. As the base idea itself seem interesting as well the possibility for what idea of 'Host' can turn into as well If possibly could I request that you look over some of my own stories as well. I have different ones post on my own page actually

Read the first six chapters and thought they were pretty interesting and detailed. The story thus far as decent amount of mystery and wonder to it. The reader and Jin being unaware of why or how everything happen also seem like good way to have so that both are learning things at the same time

Rather fascinating chapter that goes into some details of what Jin has to work with along with the unknown reasoning being revealed for why Encrid is the way he is. Almost as if the story might have been written to play him off as minor character of no real importance only to reveal in the final stages his true purpose that is hidden within plain sight. Planning and revelation not being suddenly and unearned but in the background waiting for the right moment to reveal if pieces line up just right. However since this a reality on that the piece can line up still while others can fall apart

Rather interesting that it’s remains unknown to everyone just exactly how he got isekaied into the novel. One does not always have to die for that to happen though. Know of an interesting series where a family man’s consciousness got isekaied into video game that being followed by his wife and daughter. Also the idea of them being host can develop into something much later on. Along having so that because they don’t know the ending. That vast array of things can catch them off guard along all the changes they will have to make to the main story themselves