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AlFi53
AlFi53Lv21yr
2023-09-02 15:06

I can't honestly recommend this one. You know how people complain about wimpy and simp MCs all the time? Well, this is one time when it's right. The MC is the biggest loser in existence, blushing at the sight of a woman's skin, stammering like an idiot and getting taken advantage of by others. Even if someone robs him and beats him up, he will still want to save them. Nothing you haven't seen before, the typical "good guy" TM that is an incel's wet dream. Sorry to break it to you, but women don't find loser Good Guys attractive. The MC is utterly unlikeable and it shouldn't be only the readers who realise how unlikeable he is.

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Kelvin_A
Kelvin_AAuthor

I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.

Magasu_senpai
Magasu_senpaiLv14

everyone is getting so philosophical

Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
Magasu_senpai
Magasu_senpaiLv14

i respect it

Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

The review itself isn’t subjective at all, ape-brain. Objectively speaking, most people prefer reading novels with a morally ambiguous protagonist; that can be seen from the Webnovel rankings alone.

Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

Sir Author, how many harem members did u have in mind for the MC? I'd appreciate if you can answer it.

Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
Kelvin_A
Kelvin_AAuthor

Hm, I'm not sure yet but I will start small and see where the story takes me.How many do you think would be ideal for such an MC?

JRCaste:Sir Author, how many harem members did u have in mind for the MC? I'd appreciate if you can answer it.
The_prezismoke
The_prezismokeLv15

Thanks for the heads up I’m tired of the same script over n over

Auspicious_69
Auspicious_69Lv3

no. simp is stupid. thats not an opinion. thats a subjective truth. and i condemn you for making one

Kelvin_A:I understand this review, the theme isn't for everyone but your review is entirely subjectively because this is exactly what I was going for.Then again, what you like, I might dislike so this is why I respect your review.That's reality, there are so many different people in this world and with it, comes varying personalities.Sure, it's not what you would do in his shoes but I assure, there are people like this in the real world.Everyone have a turning point that make them go, "I have had enough of this," and that triggers a change.The MC simply hasn't had that and with his past a complete blank, I do think it's far too soon to criticize how he is now. The MC isn't a PUSHOVER, that's one and while he might be naive, all his decisions would prove to be either positive or negative in the future but they ultimately shaped his path.I can't drop spoilers unfortunately but it's been good having you.
House
HouseLv15

Thanks for the warning. Going to remove the book from my list now.

Manpotion
ManpotionLv3

Thanks for the warning brother, and anyone else scrolling through the comments to decide read or not read, just dont, if you are not a kind of person that reads romance in its free time and blushes and makes anime girl voices you just wont enjoy this also; The author still believes main character isnt a pushover, bro, we aint reading your novel for 200 episodes just so we can see him not lose himself when he sees the sight of a woman, and even then, not like you'll change your style of writing and not make %80 of the novel about women and romance so. ..

Daoist8gHvTd
Daoist8gHvTdLv1

Lo que la mayoría llama protagonista moralmente ambiguo en realidad es psicópata iracundo

Kw0z:The review itself isn’t subjective at all, ape-brain. Objectively speaking, most people prefer reading novels with a morally ambiguous protagonist; that can be seen from the Webnovel rankings alone.
tonyluong25
tonyluong25Lv13

thank God I thought I was the only one

Manpotion
ManpotionLv3

Or more like, most people like reading romance and "how i become op" kind of low effort novels, i am pretty sure if i open top 100 ranking 90 of them are "how i become op/start op" or romance things, or both, and no review is subjective, not everyone has to like romance and loser characters. And, since when you are the prime minister of the "subjective or objective" desk? I really wonder who really is ape brain here, the guy who is trying to express his feelings about the content or the person who can't process the possibility that everyone has different tastes on novel and not everyone likes the same things as him, and then calls the reviewer an ape brain for reviewing the novel on the review section as its intended purpose.

Kw0z:The review itself isn’t subjective at all, ape-brain. Objectively speaking, most people prefer reading novels with a morally ambiguous protagonist; that can be seen from the Webnovel rankings alone.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Are you dumb? You just said a whole lot of nothing

Manpotion:Or more like, most people like reading romance and "how i become op" kind of low effort novels, i am pretty sure if i open top 100 ranking 90 of them are "how i become op/start op" or romance things, or both, and no review is subjective, not everyone has to like romance and loser characters. And, since when you are the prime minister of the "subjective or objective" desk? I really wonder who really is ape brain here, the guy who is trying to express his feelings about the content or the person who can't process the possibility that everyone has different tastes on novel and not everyone likes the same things as him, and then calls the reviewer an ape brain for reviewing the novel on the review section as its intended purpose.
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Bro came back 10months after you commented and 2 months after his comment to throw shade

Kw0z:Are you dumb? You just said a whole lot of nothing
Manpotion
ManpotionLv3

Nah we don't throw shades here, i am just spitting tracks and facts, truth is ageless, and someone being butt-hurt over different opinions is always present.

FinnsRevenge:Bro came back 10months after you commented and 2 months after his comment to throw shade
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

The timing is wild though, why wait so long?

Manpotion:Nah we don't throw shades here, i am just spitting tracks and facts, truth is ageless, and someone being butt-hurt over different opinions is always present.
Manpotion
ManpotionLv3

Your whole life is a whole lot of nothing anyways, what is the difference, room temperature iq algae cell

Kw0z:Are you dumb? You just said a whole lot of nothing
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Packgod watcher yikes

Manpotion:Your whole life is a whole lot of nothing anyways, what is the difference, room temperature iq algae cell
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