Item: System Of The Undead
Rating: 3.6
Author: 12keys2twilight

12keys2twilightLv141yr

2023-10-17 18:50

Its a good read story phasing is all good. Writting quality as far as i have read there is no mistakes. Character Design everything you can expect from a teenage kid. Its just not my type of MC. Im looking for a more mentally matured type who could handle certain scenarios as real adults would. So there it is this book aint for me.Overall ill rate this fic as Goodread. Goodluck to Mr. Author Maybe next time go for a darker matured MC.

System Of The Undead

Kelvin_A

3.7

333 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies1

Kelvin_AAuthor

Thank you for the review.I plan to in the sequel!

1yr

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Kelvin_AAuthor

This isn't a review post but at the same time a review post! I just think I need to state that this is my first system book so all and every criticism is welcomed, be it constructive or not. I enjoyed shows like Walking Dead and I know the final season was met wit h mixed reactions but I loved it from start to finish. Although it sucked that the types of zombies were limited but that was a personal preference. Black Summer was another but there were some elements I wished it had so I was like "Screw it, let's write a zombie book" I'm enjoying this immensely and it is currently one of my priority books. The support has been great too and I hope I get the hang of system with this book and I look forward to any and all criticism! Happy reading!

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AlFi53Lv2

I can't honestly recommend this one. You know how people complain about wimpy and simp MCs all the time? Well, this is one time when it's right. The MC is the biggest loser in existence, blushing at the sight of a woman's skin, stammering like an idiot and getting taken advantage of by others. Even if someone robs him and beats him up, he will still want to save them. Nothing you haven't seen before, the typical "good guy" TM that is an incel's wet dream. Sorry to break it to you, but women don't find loser Good Guys attractive. The MC is utterly unlikeable and it shouldn't be only the readers who realise how unlikeable he is.

1yr

Ebubechi_EmmanuelLv2

first of all, i love your verbiage. i love the mc tho i cant relate to him cos i dont lack women yk cant wait to see hi character development....or deterioration

1yr

Justin_GabventureLv13

Reading this book, i found out that this book is not your typical undead or zombie novel. Armed with a unique start and unique plot, i was captivated by how interesting the story went. I know you guys would also like this book. Give it a try and you won't regret your decision. Don't think too much, just add to library and read!

1yr

Sunny_ShumailLv14

When it comes down to Kelvin's books I know without even reading them that they will be exceptional. He has an exceptionally vast imagination which he fuses well with his words to paint such a vivid picture for his readers. I can clearly see everything unfold in my mind. I am not a system fan but this was intriguing from the very first chapter and the way he is building up the suspense and his character, I know this is going to be another masterpiece from him. I like the MC and can't wait to see his growth and how he will tackle the apocalypse. Updates are stable and I am sure he will deliver an action-packed, mind-blowing book. Good luck with WPC dear author, I know you got this ✌️All you readers, read his book and don't forget to vote.

1yr

1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

I mean its alright.

1yr

B_DRAGLv14

As I delved into the pages of this novel, I couldn't help but notice a few grammatical errors scattered throughout. However, it is not uncommon for even the most skilled authors to make such mistakes. I am confident that the author will rectify these minor flaws as the story unfolds. I commend the author for their efforts thus far, as this book undoubtedly possesses the potential to captivate readers and soar to great heights.

1yr

TabulalaLv1

Kinda interesting but since it seems the mc is a white knight in the apocalypse and would still protect the girl who robbed him he's kinda an idiot. Maybe for others but not for me Author seems have no plan of character development (based on his replies maybe in the future he might) So yeah not for me

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