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Kelvin_A
Kelvin_AAuthor1yr
2023-08-12 13:46

This isn't a review post but at the same time a review post! I just think I need to state that this is my first system book so all and every criticism is welcomed, be it constructive or not. I enjoyed shows like Walking Dead and I know the final season was met wit h mixed reactions but I loved it from start to finish. Although it sucked that the types of zombies were limited but that was a personal preference. Black Summer was another but there were some elements I wished it had so I was like "Screw it, let's write a zombie book" I'm enjoying this immensely and it is currently one of my priority books. The support has been great too and I hope I get the hang of system with this book and I look forward to any and all criticism! Happy reading!

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Kelvin_A
Kelvin_AAuthor

Author here and I wish to address a few things for the readers so they can decide if they continue read or not. First of all, the MC isn't some chad who gets girls with a single glance and drop panties just by breathing. The MC comes with certain baggage that would be explained later. Why didn't I make my MC some high IQ individual that makes all the right choices and is some evil genius? Its simple, all my other books have this exact traits and this is me branching out and going outside my comfort zone. Not going to lie, I cringe at certain things but it FITS his character traits so these are decisions he would make. Everything is explained at later chapters before chapter 120 and MC does undergo character development long before then. You can read the free chapters, that digging before you find gold basically. I know this isn't everyone's type of thing and if it isn't, it doesn't necessarily make the book a bad one. "I don't like Godfather so Godfather is mid," As I have seen people dislike masterpieces such as AOT among others. But I accept all criticism, even the bitter ones because I see a point in all of your messages and I will take this into considering with the series Now about the system, I have seen multiple complains. And to be honest, I have little to no knowledge about systems. I did some research and there is a reason I chose this type of system. But patience is key, everything will make sense, Heck, I must be doing something right because the book is doing pretty well. Also, I plan to make spinoffs using this as a catalyst. This is the first installment out of a potential 4. So.... Thank you for reading and sticking with me even, this is a new zone for me as I could have easily stuck to what I am used to but I didn't. If you're looking for a smart MC that makes choices based on logic and not emotional influenced. This is the wrong book, you should read my other book. "The Son Of Ragnar"

Sniper_Fury
Sniper_FuryLv15

I have read until chapter 120 and to be honest this dude has not changed at all. Also can you try making a story whit a normal mc both Ragnar son and this story are way too much in the extremes making them get old fast

Kelvin_A:Author here and I wish to address a few things for the readers so they can decide if they continue read or not. First of all, the MC isn't some chad who gets girls with a single glance and drop panties just by breathing. The MC comes with certain baggage that would be explained later. Why didn't I make my MC some high IQ individual that makes all the right choices and is some evil genius? Its simple, all my other books have this exact traits and this is me branching out and going outside my comfort zone. Not going to lie, I cringe at certain things but it FITS his character traits so these are decisions he would make. Everything is explained at later chapters before chapter 120 and MC does undergo character development long before then. You can read the free chapters, that digging before you find gold basically. I know this isn't everyone's type of thing and if it isn't, it doesn't necessarily make the book a bad one. "I don't like Godfather so Godfather is mid," As I have seen people dislike masterpieces such as AOT among others. But I accept all criticism, even the bitter ones because I see a point in all of your messages and I will take this into considering with the series Now about the system, I have seen multiple complains. And to be honest, I have little to no knowledge about systems. I did some research and there is a reason I chose this type of system. But patience is key, everything will make sense, Heck, I must be doing something right because the book is doing pretty well. Also, I plan to make spinoffs using this as a catalyst. This is the first installment out of a potential 4. So.... Thank you for reading and sticking with me even, this is a new zone for me as I could have easily stuck to what I am used to but I didn't. If you're looking for a smart MC that makes choices based on logic and not emotional influenced. This is the wrong book, you should read my other book. "The Son Of Ragnar"
Kelvin_A
Kelvin_AAuthor

You got it, I will try and do so.These books aren't the typical books so I understand what you mean by this.It's one of those books where you either really love it or you don't.And it has everything to do with the tags as well.

Sniper_Fury:I have read until chapter 120 and to be honest this dude has not changed at all. Also can you try making a story whit a normal mc both Ragnar son and this story are way too much in the extremes making them get old fast
DragonGodAsurA
DragonGodAsurALv4

making a another master peice i see. i gotta catch up in son of ragnar i was tryna binge the chaps stopped reading around the part where tyr meats the opposing king and is tryna get him to marry his daughter anyways enough about me. Your an amazing author hope i can continue to support you stories and maybe see them live action especially ur son of ragnar book it deserves to be there[img=update]

Kelvin_A
Kelvin_AAuthor

You're too kind! I recently just started updating that one again, you can expect daily uploads. I should be rounding up this next month

DragonGodAsurA:making a another master peice i see. i gotta catch up in son of ragnar i was tryna binge the chaps stopped reading around the part where tyr meats the opposing king and is tryna get him to marry his daughter anyways enough about me. Your an amazing author hope i can continue to support you stories and maybe see them live action especially ur son of ragnar book it deserves to be there[img=update]
wo_x
wo_xLv15

I read a little bit of this then skipped a few chapter and kept doing that until the end to get a little gist of the story. This ain’t really a harem is it? In fact, the Clementine situation with Sam REALLY put me off ngl. But my question ig is is this a harem or not because it has the harem tag but I’m not really seeing it?

A_Stevenson
A_StevensonLv14

Just a comment about the picture. You can always just do AI pics. That way, nobody can claim it as theirs. If they do, then you can send them to the AI pic generator that you got it from and avoid any legal hassles.

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