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2024-11-13 02:08

Super great story ❤️🥰 I love Erix and Rins journey throughout the world and how they face all the challenges and obstacles, the way how the world is built and how Erix and Rin devlope their power and love, and the way how it transitions into a harem is good but the only part I didn’t like was the side effects of his undead source and how he had to find disgusting women.

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Writing my second review here, I'll tell what you can expect from the story after I've written 294 chapters, and nearing the end of my 2nd volume, which was a one hell of a journey in the Abyss. The main focus of the novel is MCs, their thrilling adventures of ups-downs and gaining/learning exotic powers that I cook with limitless creativity for cool/hype factor purpose and quick, Bloodpumping, and comprehensive fights of all kinds and avenues. There are RI8 scenes, only 1 in 1st volume, several in 2nd volume early and then very low through the rest, so know that e-chi is not the focus here despite the tags R-I8 and H@rem. R-I8 here also means it's dark and gritty. It's no fairy tale, so expect brut@lity, both psychologically and physically. There is H@rem, but title is Supreme Couple, and this remained, remains, and will remain true throughout the story. The h@rem is also not run-of-mill cuz this is not a H@rem story. It became one due to circumstances and plot, and it couldn't be otherwise with the way I've developed main characters. They are outlandish, for all my purpose and intent, and i immensely enjoy writing their developing journey in my fantastic world of Grand Primal Cosmos. The power structure is simple but broad, and unique because I can't be satisfied otherwise. All ticks of world-buildings are ticked. If you dig fine, immaculate, BIG world-building, you'll enjoy it more and more as you continue to learn about it more in 2nd volume, and then see it in action in 3rd one, but...this one is a long ride. I want to write 1k+ chapters, and it's highly possible with the world-building's skeleton structure i have and I've only revealed 20% of it so far. The current cast of characters, and expanded world-building that I laid out will play big role in the 3rd volume, so wars, drama, and more action. Expect cool dialogues and edginess, but naturally flowed, ingrained in theme, situational, and characters. This is all, folks. Give this one a try if you dig the above mention things and even if you don't, you might come to enjoy them, who knows? :P PS: I reward both: hunger & patience. Thank you for reading, have a good day ^.^/

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