Writing my second review here, I'll tell what you can expect from the story after I've written 294 chapters, and nearing the end of my 2nd volume, which was a one hell of a journey in the Abyss. The main focus of the novel is MCs, their thrilling adventures of ups-downs and gaining/learning exotic powers that I cook with limitless creativity for cool/hype factor purpose and quick, Bloodpumping, and comprehensive fights of all kinds and avenues. There are RI8 scenes, only 1 in 1st volume, several in 2nd volume early and then very low through the rest, so know that e-chi is not the focus here despite the tags R-I8 and H@rem. R-I8 here also means it's dark and gritty. It's no fairy tale, so expect brut@lity, both psychologically and physically. There is H@rem, but title is Supreme Couple, and this remained, remains, and will remain true throughout the story. The h@rem is also not run-of-mill cuz this is not a H@rem story. It became one due to circumstances and plot, and it couldn't be otherwise with the way I've developed main characters. They are outlandish, for all my purpose and intent, and i immensely enjoy writing their developing journey in my fantastic world of Grand Primal Cosmos. The power structure is simple but broad, and unique because I can't be satisfied otherwise. All ticks of world-buildings are ticked. If you dig fine, immaculate, BIG world-building, you'll enjoy it more and more as you continue to learn about it more in 2nd volume, and then see it in action in 3rd one, but...this one is a long ride. I want to write 1k+ chapters, and it's highly possible with the world-building's skeleton structure i have and I've only revealed 20% of it so far. The current cast of characters, and expanded world-building that I laid out will play big role in the 3rd volume, so wars, drama, and more action. Expect cool dialogues and edginess, but naturally flowed, ingrained in theme, situational, and characters. This is all, folks. Give this one a try if you dig the above mention things and even if you don't, you might come to enjoy them, who knows? :P PS: I reward both: hunger & patience. Thank you for reading, have a good day ^.^/

Let's go about the review one point at a time. 📍WRITING QUALITY: It is great. You may find an error or two in 10 chapters, but that is negligible compared to the overall quality of writing. 📍STORY DEVELOPMENT: You will find the flow of story natural. No random info dump, only there when needed and it seems to fit perfectly in the story(I mean it doesn't feel much like info dump) 📍CHARACTER DESIGN: You will most likely find the characters are as real as they can get. I won't explain more on this as you will find out when reading. 📍UPDATE STABILITY: You get 2 doses every 2 days(approx. 8 chapters a week). 📍WORLD BACKGROUND: All I would say is that it is an interesting and vast world. 🎯CONCLUSION: ALL IN ALL, I WOULD SAY IS THAT, I AM CONFIDENT ENOUGH THAT YOU WILL LIKE THIS STORY.

This is a peak novel, with an even better set of MC’s. Rin and Erix ARE the Supreme Couple, their intense love for each other, their hunger for power and strength, and their combat styles just cement that idea. The power system is fun seeing how free you are to develop your own attributes, concepts, and skills. The world building and other characters are fun and engaging and I’m looking forward to what’s more to come.

Great novel. I even went as far as to purchase privilege towards the end of the month, which to me is a waste, but the novel had me hooked and I wanted to keep reading.The writing quality is good. You will find occasional grammatical errors, but nothing that will disrupt your reading pace or cause difficulties in understanding the context of the sentences or paragraphs. I personally believe the story is developing quite well so far. Nothing has been drawn out, and I haven't found myself ever having to fast-forward through chapters, which is great. I am enjoying the main characters in this novel. It's centered around MC and his wife, instead of the normal solo MC. Therefore, the author does a great job never letting her fall behind, and instead of the wife being in his shadow we get to see her improvement along with his, which is cool. As for their characters, I would describe them as the typical good to their friends (very few they have can count on one hand) and ruthless to their enemies.The world background is probably one of the best things about the novel you'll understand once you start reading.

This is by far one of the best novels I have ever read the update speed may not be very fast but it is worth the wait I'd recommend this novel for people that are looking for good apocalypse novels and the character design is very nice I also like Erix's personality and way of reasoning . One of the many reasons why I really like this novel is because of the female lead's personality , most novels have the the mc focusing too much on female lead because she is weak which slows down the story development. I hope this review can help the author

Writing Quality: Few enough mistakes that it doesn’t really impact flow of the novel and the descriptions are easy to imagine while still looking amazing. Updating Stability: At the time of writing, the author posts two chapters everyday consistently. Story Development: The story pacing is fairly good, allowing you to easily follow what is happening while still being packed full of action and storytelling. Character Design: The character designs are all simplistic yet unique, allowing each character to feel fresh while not overloading your brain with information whenever a new character appears. World Background: The novel is set in an apocalypse where many people turned into zombies and animals mutated into powerful beasts, while the remaining survivors have a system to help them get stronger and survive in this lawless and deadly world.

Im on ch50 I really don't Rin got like all the good skill without any consequence for it ,but every time the mc got a skill there is a consequence and every time there is an orb or chest rin gets almost everything

Great novel, love the main characters they have a unique way of doing stuff.The system seems great and the theme of it being zombies at the start with some mutated monsters such as flies made it extreme fun for those who enjoy this genre! I suggest you give it a try.

Full 5 stars, very good novel. Everything is balanced, though it's not my type of story, so I'll have to drop it. Of course, there are the common small mistakes, but back to my point, a well-done novel.

i enjoyed this novel because most romantic novel are so boring that mc loves the female lead but won't even kiss, or do ( YOU KNOW WHAT 🙄 ) . honestly I love this novel.