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2023-11-10 03:15

Im on ch50 I really don't Rin got like all the good skill without any consequence for it ,but every time the mc got a skill there is a consequence and every time there is an orb or chest rin gets almost everything

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I don't recall planning things like that at all. Both of them were together all the time, and they participated in all the so-called consequences you spoke of together, so I don't know what you mean by that. Both of them have picked loots suitable to them, tho Erix had been a bit weak stat-wise due to not having an armor-set early, but that's not a problem at all a bit later. Also, Q-Q you will understand the power structure and the 'true skills' Erix and Rin 'creates' as that is the main way kinda.

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