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Reading_Monk
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2024-01-25 15:05

Let's go about the review one point at a time. 📍WRITING QUALITY: It is great. You may find an error or two in 10 chapters, but that is negligible compared to the overall quality of writing. 📍STORY DEVELOPMENT: You will find the flow of story natural. No random info dump, only there when needed and it seems to fit perfectly in the story(I mean it doesn't feel much like info dump) 📍CHARACTER DESIGN: You will most likely find the characters are as real as they can get. I won't explain more on this as you will find out when reading. 📍UPDATE STABILITY: You get 2 doses every 2 days(approx. 8 chapters a week). 📍WORLD BACKGROUND: All I would say is that it is an interesting and vast world. 🎯CONCLUSION: ALL IN ALL, I WOULD SAY IS THAT, I AM CONFIDENT ENOUGH THAT YOU WILL LIKE THIS STORY.

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BLOOD_TEMPEST
BLOOD_TEMPESTLv3

hey I wanted to ask since author didn't clearify does he love his harem other than the main girl or was it just for convenience and he doesn't really care about them also will there be more girls in the harem and does it include any kind of ntr or r*pe and stuff like that?

Reading_Monk
Reading_MonkLv4

Since you asked and as I wouldn't like to spoil you on the story much, I would say that he doesn't go around and keep adding women to his harem and that too only after their approval. I hope this gives you an idea about the story. There is no ntr(Netor@re). For the last part, I would say that this is a dog-eat-dog world, you will see unwilling slaves who were against them and evil in nature.

BLOOD_TEMPEST:hey I wanted to ask since author didn't clearify does he love his harem other than the main girl or was it just for convenience and he doesn't really care about them also will there be more girls in the harem and does it include any kind of ntr or r*pe and stuff like that?
BLOOD_TEMPEST
BLOOD_TEMPESTLv3

thank you for your answer but you still didn't clearify whether he cares more for the main girl then other harem members

Reading_Monk:Since you asked and as I wouldn't like to spoil you on the story much, I would say that he doesn't go around and keep adding women to his harem and that too only after their approval. I hope this gives you an idea about the story. There is no ntr(Netor@re). For the last part, I would say that this is a dog-eat-dog world, you will see unwilling slaves who were against them and evil in nature.
Reading_Monk
Reading_MonkLv4

At first only Main FL, but later on it changes.

BLOOD_TEMPEST:thank you for your answer but you still didn't clearify whether he cares more for the main girl then other harem members
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