I found the novel good. The absence of a harem gives this novel a big plus. because in la et danmachi every non-male character falls in love with mc. but i have one disappointment. this mc's bell. I wish it was someone else instead of Bell. I don't like Bell, but I'd like it if he looked a little bit of a man with a good adult by his side.

The protagonist is annoying. There are characters who do not have emotions and also those who do not have social skills and there is the protagonist of the soap opera who has emotions, has social skills but does not use them.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

I think the story is good and has a lot of potential for growth but as of right now one thing I find slightly disappointing is that The MC is needlessly dark I get there is a reason, but it just feels forced and an excuse to right a dark protagonist.

So I read your story MHA and wanted to know if you are going to release chapters again?....................................................................................... ....

This is good. Writing is nice and fun to read. Story itself is intriguing. I don’t need to know mc’s background or any irrelevant history of his. His actions speaks louder. But having a stonefaced, uninterested by anything vibe of mc becoming boring. If he doesn’t have fun, scare, rage or yearn for anything, why should we read it?

This story would have been really popular if the author worked a bit on the story development the world background and the character design. I mean this story is so rushed that it feels quite forced tbh

MC kept being more and more edgy in later chapters to the point of repetitive and boring.

I want more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR NEW CHAPTERS WHEN WILL IT COME??????????? HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

a very good, well-constructed fanfic with interesting characters and an encouraging start, a relatively well-explained and detailed world as well as the interactions between the characters. Frequent updates and weekly content provided and maintained. I would like more visibility for this fanfic which has potential as well as more reviews to increase its visibility. If I have to make one criticism it is the appearance of the mc which is not introduced in a clear manner and without context but that can be introduced later if it is a voluntary act of the author