Item: In DxD with the Eyes of God
Rating: 2.4
Author: crinix

crinixLv131yr

2023-09-26 01:29

It's a great fanfic...but i think Author wasted a lot potential by rushing the plot.Side character are not really they just in background for one or two dialogue...like literally I don't remember the name of MC sister because she doesn't really have a role in fanfic aside from just being there...just like the Cursed hammer he got at early stages i also don't remember much about him because Author is rushing the writing.It has become boring and predictable...i think Author is going with the theme of MC doing all the things and making things alright for people and in the End he will become Ultimate God and will live happily after.Basically its a fix it type fanfic.

In DxD with the Eyes of God

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