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sangster21
sangster21Lv141yr
2023-07-23 22:25

it would be a great ff if he wasn't dxds mc, but a oc that is my only problem with the story

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Nob7
Nob7Lv4

Wait so the MC just follow cannon?, like that's it?

Daoist9177NN
Daoist9177NNLv4

Nah it hasn't even reached the canon. It may follow the canon in the future(can't really tell u that) but for now its a completely AU arc.

Nob7:Wait so the MC just follow cannon?, like that's it?
Daoist9177NN
Daoist9177NNLv4

And in the review i think he means that the mc reincarnating into Issie's body put him off the whole idea.

Nob7:Wait so the MC just follow cannon?, like that's it?
Nob7
Nob7Lv4

Oh, thank you for clearing that up for me man(?).

Daoist9177NN:And in the review i think he means that the mc reincarnating into Issie's body put him off the whole idea.
Daoist9177NN
Daoist9177NNLv4

Nob7:Oh, thank you for clearing that up for me man(?).
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Kiradeux
KiradeuxLv13

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