Item: In DxD with the Eyes of God
Rating: 3.8
Author: _Monarch

_MonarchLv141yr

2023-07-18 17:32

A honest review on how i think about this story...This story is good and has lots of potential but the main drawback is mc isn't smart enough to utilise the power efficiently and also this story has too many plot holes...the MC's thinking isn't suitable for his current world so character development is certainly necessary (may happen in the future) cuz knowing the hidden dangers but still not taking precautions is plain stupid...I don't want this story to be removed from my library due to uncertain plot twists and ruining it...this review may not necessarily be same for the others so do try to read before replying 👍

In DxD with the Eyes of God

Ventus889

4.0

83 Chs

Liked by 29 people

Replies5

AbyssalHungerLv14

Update on review? Perchance

1yr

_MonarchLv14

sorry bro I've dropped this...it isn't my cup of tea

AbyssalHunger:Update on review? Perchance

1yr

AbyssalHungerLv14

Ah I see..

_Monarch:sorry bro I've dropped this...it isn't my cup of tea

1yr

ParacausalityLv14

It gets worse

AbyssalHunger:Update on review? Perchance

1yr

The_Dark_HydraxLv4

On top of everything else, it seems this doesn't have lemons. Making a DxD fanfic and not having lemons is blasphemy!

1yr

Other Reviews

ferferfer2Lv5

author-san, lots of franchises have an eye power called "the eyes of god", please be more specific on the synopses

1yr

Tim_QQQLv1

its one of those emo "you dont know the pain ive experienced" main characters. everything to get stronger requires an ungodly amount of pain that this person just goes through like nothing. its a really common way for lazy writers to explain power progression, just saying that the mc trains 18 hours a day and is in pain constantly.

1yr

Orsted_samaLv3

Don't you Dare Drop this!! For I The Great Dragon God Orsted Have comed to like this Novel!

1yr

KiradeuxLv13

Story is an AU from basic DxD, Issei has an 6-year elder sister. No Irina, no friends. The early chapters, at least, constantly use the term "Primal Energy" for what is well established under the same description as "ki" within DxD lore and power systems. Author has a good grasp of the language and sentence structure and has potential in writing, however the early chapters of this story fall short on mechanics and integration into existing world mechanics. These are foundational elements that can't really be retconned later on. - MC uses "Eyes of God" to perform discount Senjutsu - MC's "discount senjutsu" literally requires he go stab trees and hold his hand over the wound to absorb tha powah. - MC does literally nothing with the power he absorbs, he doesn't try to do anything, he doesn't research, he doesn't try to control it, he doesn't try to find any other way to absorb it besides STAB TREE! - MC's life becomes a training montage at 8 years old, with extra tree-stabbing. - Seriously, he stabs trees for powerups. The story title feels misleading; yes, he has these "Eyes of God", Yes, they are omnipotent "observe"-cheat on super steroids. But the MC kinda fails at a fundamental level when using them. If your main power is connected to a form of perception, then it becomes critical to the story that the form of perception that is enhanced becomes a part of the story. A character with super eyes tends to use them to do perceptive things; our MC just goes with the first thing that works.

1yr

sangster21Lv14

it would be a great ff if he wasn't dxds mc, but a oc that is my only problem with the story

1yr

Lucas_5125Lv4

This is an interesting idea I look forward to more. Please continue to update. This has good potential.

1yr

UnwantedGodLv11

i gotta Ask before Reading this fanfic...Is There A Harem? or Is There Not.

1yr

crinixLv13

It's a great fanfic...but i think Author wasted a lot potential by rushing the plot.Side character are not really they just in background for one or two dialogue...like literally I don't remember the name of MC sister because she doesn't really have a role in fanfic aside from just being there...just like the Cursed hammer he got at early stages i also don't remember much about him because Author is rushing the writing.It has become boring and predictable...i think Author is going with the theme of MC doing all the things and making things alright for people and in the End he will become Ultimate God and will live happily after.Basically its a fix it type fanfic.

1yr

Cam82938Lv4

It’s crazy that this book as become unreadable for me simply because of the word “ofuda” its literally the main character of the story. Like what anime started this ofuda garbage, delete this anime. Literally sounds like a worse version of gu just tired of the hearing the words man PLEASE talk about something else

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