Interesting concept, lacklust plot. Story pacing is too fast, and plot holes pop up left and right. The story lacks exposition, and there is not enough context for a complex understanding of the characters and world background. Daniel, for example, has a system that makes him more money than 99.9% of people in the first four chapters. We don’t know where the system came from, how he acquired it, why he acquired it, and we don’t have any information on the background of the world like why modern names and brands are being used but a different type of coin (stellar coin) replaces the dollar, and libertopia replaces the name of the United States.
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