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novelmeisterLv159mth
2024-05-05 06:11

Interesting concept, lacklust plot. Story pacing is too fast, and plot holes pop up left and right. The story lacks exposition, and there is not enough context for a complex understanding of the characters and world background. Daniel, for example, has a system that makes him more money than 99.9% of people in the first four chapters. We don’t know where the system came from, how he acquired it, why he acquired it, and we don’t have any information on the background of the world like why modern names and brands are being used but a different type of coin (stellar coin) replaces the dollar, and libertopia replaces the name of the United States.

Live Stream Treasure Hunt: I Made Profits Million Times Over

Red_Skin_Duck
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561 Chs

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RAMINATOR
RAMINATORLv15

This book started out very good for the most part aside from some grammatical errors but this went from having an appraisal system in a world like our own that was unique and quite good to secret societies of superhumans and monsters from the mind of H.H. Holmes. Just feels like the author is forcing this change because now at chapter 170 the MC hasn't been to an auction in a long time and all he does is fight supernatural creatures.

1yr
naruru
naruruLv2

This review is write at CH19. Writing quality and update is good, Story develop is a bit boring? it like there was no main goal yet at this point it about mc get rich and learning about his ability and due to MC character that was a bit careless and bit dumb? it make story seem not make sense because the story make other character lower their brain to match MC, And World Background is just normal modern now?. But if you want novel that not serious and enjoy this one is OK!. -Suggest : The chat stream is so stupid they not look real at all, The real chat is so toxic and very smart, Try to think that you are a viewer your self and watch a guy on stream and this streamer don't chat with you in nonsense topic to entertain you and only chat with you when he was going to show his smart and 7in10 of the time if streamer don't answer chat they will chat ridiculous among them self, What kind of chat that still ask the streamer that only shake your head almost entire time.

1yr
name1681
name1681Lv14

Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

1yr
Bro_Daos
Bro_DaosLv10

Pretty unexpected, but it's a beautiful novel. Unfortunately, webnovel does not support translation, if you buy chapters. So i can't read it. Also English is not my native language, I don't want to waste my time just for translation words that I don't understand. Good job writer.

1yr
Shade08
Shade08Lv4

Review at CH 70... FORCED PLOT.....well the story has been great up until now but the author decided to force the plot at this junction....Dan could have just dial the number of the Godfather but the author decided to force the plot for further chapters and if Daniel could kill the first guy on his land then he should have easily killed the second one too.

1yr
KDottt22
KDottt22Lv15

Reveal spoiler

9mth
Ju972
Ju972Lv13

I was quite happy with the story but it took another turn around ch. 100 or something, I'm so disappointed with myself having bought it impulsively. it was a great story until it went completely supernatural.

1mth
Happyghildiyal
HappyghildiyalLv3

Good Quality, Above average Story Development, Good Character Design, Great World Building.

11mth
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