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naruruLv21yr
2023-06-18 19:03

This review is write at CH19. Writing quality and update is good, Story develop is a bit boring? it like there was no main goal yet at this point it about mc get rich and learning about his ability and due to MC character that was a bit careless and bit dumb? it make story seem not make sense because the story make other character lower their brain to match MC, And World Background is just normal modern now?. But if you want novel that not serious and enjoy this one is OK!. -Suggest : The chat stream is so stupid they not look real at all, The real chat is so toxic and very smart, Try to think that you are a viewer your self and watch a guy on stream and this streamer don't chat with you in nonsense topic to entertain you and only chat with you when he was going to show his smart and 7in10 of the time if streamer don't answer chat they will chat ridiculous among them self, What kind of chat that still ask the streamer that only shake your head almost entire time.

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Red_Skin_DuckAuthor

Thank you for your suggestion and support! As for main goal, of course there will be, the first 30+chapters are just warm up, be patient and the story wont let you down![img=recommend]

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