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Shade08
Shade08Lv41yr
2023-08-25 03:20

Review at CH 70... FORCED PLOT.....well the story has been great up until now but the author decided to force the plot at this junction....Dan could have just dial the number of the Godfather but the author decided to force the plot for further chapters and if Daniel could kill the first guy on his land then he should have easily killed the second one too.

Live Stream Treasure Hunt: I Made Profits Million Times Over

Red_Skin_Duck
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Red_Skin_Duck
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Hello guys, author here. After 15 days of updating, my book is finally going to be premium. First off, I want to extend my gratitude to all of you who have been supportive and have read up to the latest chapter. The original intention of my writing is to bring joy to all of you. If my novel has brought you some happiness, then all my efforts are worthwhile. Your appreciation of my stories brings me an enormous sense of accomplishment. Now that the book is entering the publication phase, I hope you will continue to support me and subscribe to my upcoming chapters. Your subscriptions are the most important motivation for me to strive to write better stories! Moreover, I hope all readers can feel free to comment. I will try my best to interact with you, helping you understand more about the background and setting of this book. If you have any good suggestions, please write them in the comment section, I will definitely take a look. In conclusion, I hope you will continue subscribing and supporting. Also, you can vote for me with Power Stones, for which I would be immensely grateful! I will work even harder to bring you more interesting stories!

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RAMINATOR
RAMINATORLv15

This book started out very good for the most part aside from some grammatical errors but this went from having an appraisal system in a world like our own that was unique and quite good to secret societies of superhumans and monsters from the mind of H.H. Holmes. Just feels like the author is forcing this change because now at chapter 170 the MC hasn't been to an auction in a long time and all he does is fight supernatural creatures.

1yr
naruru
naruruLv2

This review is write at CH19. Writing quality and update is good, Story develop is a bit boring? it like there was no main goal yet at this point it about mc get rich and learning about his ability and due to MC character that was a bit careless and bit dumb? it make story seem not make sense because the story make other character lower their brain to match MC, And World Background is just normal modern now?. But if you want novel that not serious and enjoy this one is OK!. -Suggest : The chat stream is so stupid they not look real at all, The real chat is so toxic and very smart, Try to think that you are a viewer your self and watch a guy on stream and this streamer don't chat with you in nonsense topic to entertain you and only chat with you when he was going to show his smart and 7in10 of the time if streamer don't answer chat they will chat ridiculous among them self, What kind of chat that still ask the streamer that only shake your head almost entire time.

1yr
name1681
name1681Lv14

Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

1yr
Bro_Daos
Bro_DaosLv10

Pretty unexpected, but it's a beautiful novel. Unfortunately, webnovel does not support translation, if you buy chapters. So i can't read it. Also English is not my native language, I don't want to waste my time just for translation words that I don't understand. Good job writer.

1yr
Paul_Justice
Paul_JusticeLv4

Hi author, all I can say is that this novel had a very sweet and good beginning, plot twist and world background is nice, but it’s getting more and more annoying because- 1•you over explain senerios 2•our MC doesn’t use his power to the fullest, wen he can use his appraisal he doesn’t but he becomes so d*mb and dives head straight into fight 3•it became worse as soon as he got the rebirth and healing powers he doesn’t plan just wasting life chances and wasting life chances is all he does. 4•what happened to the streaming and cargo gambling? Swept under the drain It’s getting more and more annoying to read, the system is bearly showing powers, MC has a magic skill to learn he has stones tucked away in his safe in the mansion he bought but he hasn’t used any of those, I think the MC becomes more and more d*mb as the plot progresses

1mth
Ju972
Ju972Lv14

I was quite happy with the story but it took another turn around ch. 100 or something, I'm so disappointed with myself having bought it impulsively. it was a great story until it went completely supernatural.

3mth
KDottt22
KDottt22Lv15

Reveal spoiler

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beast_eater
beast_eaterLv1

This was really fun and interesting until the author decided to go all supernatural power/god mode on the story, it completely went to crap and the whole purpose of the plot disappeared. It's like it transformed into an action story, complete waste. Digging through 300 chapters of trash for nothing.

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