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Garland
GarlandLv41yr
2023-11-14 16:54

The most interesting thing about the fanfic is the whole hentaiverse which alone allows for a large number of good characters and situations. The writing has some problems as it can sometimes become confusing on what is going on. The System is just their, doesn't really explain itself and is mostly used just for the plot. Its not fully explained and while I understand its reward system, it is sometimes vague that it feels like its rewards are just their to pull something to help in the plot. The main issue and problem that i think lowers the story overall is the MC, Mu Xiaoxiao. Besides his Chinese name and overall character that feels like came from a Chinese novel, his personality is cringe, boring, inconsistent and sometimes just annoying. He doesn't really feel like an actual character and sometimes acts kinda dumb in situation. He is mostly passive unless things force him despite knowing how his system rewards him. Its like if he was going to be rewarded by picking an apple while being surrounded by apple trees, instead of actually picking one, he just waits and sits around until an apple falls. He is so passive that situations has the be forced to start in order for him to act. Sure in later chapters he does become a little active but from the start, he was very passive. It's fine if it is what the system needs him to do but the system, like i have said, is so vague and confusing in explanation that it doesn't make sense. Overall the story is interesting, being set in the hentaiverse, but Mu Xuaoxiao tends to be just the most uninteresting parts at times.

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Sir_Jadeja
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About the fanfiction.. Protagonist: The protagonist is a pure hater of NTR and it's all about killing the yellow hairs and saving those girls.. Characters: The heroines, well they are cowardly and stupid..like every girl on such type should be, but as the story progresses they also become the partners of justice with the protagonist, face their fears and kill those yellow hairs. Harem: The protagonist had a dream to open a harem just like every guy who transmigrates into an anime world but after knowing what kind of world it is, he refuses to open a harem..but well there's harem tag so whether he refuses or not doesn't matter.. Translation: That's probably the main point every one focussed on. But I just want to say that, The translation is actually quite decent if you ignore a few chinese metaphors which are quite easy to understand, for me they were, I don't know for any one else.. Also the translator has added many scenes that were not in te original fanfic..and actually there were many.. I know because I've read the original and I can say that he did a brilliant job. If you have not read the original one you wouldn't even know, they fit so perfectly in the story and actually made it better to read.. A lot of people have problem with the main character's name but it's fine, And if you have time then you can just add another version exactly the same as this one, using a japanese name, that would just make them shut up. So, overall even with all the problems, it deserves 4.5 stars, but since this is a proper NTR bashing fanfic and because the author did a lot of work to translate this, I am giving it 5 stars.

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