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SAURON_
SAURON_Lv21yr
2023-06-11 00:51

alright the only thing you need to do is make this flow better and allowing readers to understand more also please change the system because it's really weird and inferior to the system i messaged you about author.

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Jonathan_Zarco
Jonathan_ZarcoLv2

It's a translation bro

SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

yes i know lol

Jonathan_Zarco:It's a translation bro
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Sir_Jadeja
Sir_JadejaLv1

About the fanfiction.. Protagonist: The protagonist is a pure hater of NTR and it's all about killing the yellow hairs and saving those girls.. Characters: The heroines, well they are cowardly and stupid..like every girl on such type should be, but as the story progresses they also become the partners of justice with the protagonist, face their fears and kill those yellow hairs. Harem: The protagonist had a dream to open a harem just like every guy who transmigrates into an anime world but after knowing what kind of world it is, he refuses to open a harem..but well there's harem tag so whether he refuses or not doesn't matter.. Translation: That's probably the main point every one focussed on. But I just want to say that, The translation is actually quite decent if you ignore a few chinese metaphors which are quite easy to understand, for me they were, I don't know for any one else.. Also the translator has added many scenes that were not in te original fanfic..and actually there were many.. I know because I've read the original and I can say that he did a brilliant job. If you have not read the original one you wouldn't even know, they fit so perfectly in the story and actually made it better to read.. A lot of people have problem with the main character's name but it's fine, And if you have time then you can just add another version exactly the same as this one, using a japanese name, that would just make them shut up. So, overall even with all the problems, it deserves 4.5 stars, but since this is a proper NTR bashing fanfic and because the author did a lot of work to translate this, I am giving it 5 stars.

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