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2023-06-03 20:40

This concept is amazing because I am sick of being tired of female characters in the NTR world is so stupid and I hope you keep writing more of these and can increase the words in the chapters to better enjoy this and hope MC gets a harem with these female characters and straighten up them up

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About the fanfiction.. Protagonist: The protagonist is a pure hater of NTR and it's all about killing the yellow hairs and saving those girls.. Characters: The heroines, well they are cowardly and stupid..like every girl on such type should be, but as the story progresses they also become the partners of justice with the protagonist, face their fears and kill those yellow hairs. Harem: The protagonist had a dream to open a harem just like every guy who transmigrates into an anime world but after knowing what kind of world it is, he refuses to open a harem..but well there's harem tag so whether he refuses or not doesn't matter.. Translation: That's probably the main point every one focussed on. But I just want to say that, The translation is actually quite decent if you ignore a few chinese metaphors which are quite easy to understand, for me they were, I don't know for any one else.. Also the translator has added many scenes that were not in te original fanfic..and actually there were many.. I know because I've read the original and I can say that he did a brilliant job. If you have not read the original one you wouldn't even know, they fit so perfectly in the story and actually made it better to read.. A lot of people have problem with the main character's name but it's fine, And if you have time then you can just add another version exactly the same as this one, using a japanese name, that would just make them shut up. So, overall even with all the problems, it deserves 4.5 stars, but since this is a proper NTR bashing fanfic and because the author did a lot of work to translate this, I am giving it 5 stars.

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